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A Series of One-shots focusing on Villains that have been blasted by the Elements of Harmony.

Frame story: Twilight Sparkle becomes more Curious about the Elements of Harmony and asks other beings that have had the Elements used on them.

Luna: Luna gets a secretary/keeper to help with a mild guilt complex

Sunset Shimmer: The Humane Five learn how desperate redemption can be

Cover by Magello

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

They’re stationary now yet they traveled between worlds to blast three sirens with a good times lance and striped them of their magical singing voices.

Should be 'stripped'.

I like the concept, though I always just assumed Discord got stoned because he was the opposite of Harmony.

I'll be watching this; there's good potential here.

Great concept. I see a whole lot of potential here.
And you got Discord's comedy down well. :rainbowlaugh:

But you should keep your typing style consistint. It's kind of hard to read at times.

Mm, very interesting concept. I look forward to more! :pinkiehappy:

I like it, please continue.

“Research?” Celestia smiled wide, “Come now, Luna, No need to use code words with me, I’m so happy for you two”

Luna’s eyes went wide and her jaw dropped, “Princess Celestia Solaria of Equestria, You stop that kind of talk right now! By our mother, I don’t know who’s worse with crazy love fantasies, you or Cadance.”

No! NO! NO, NO, NO, NO, NO, NO, NO! NO!!! NOOOOOO! :flutterrage:

(clears throat) No. :scootangel:

I really liked this chapter, but oh dear sweet merciful Celestia get an editor! While the spelling is fine for the most part you really seem to have a problem with random capitalizations everywhere. The interpunction stands to improve as well.

“I once took an assertiveness seminar and it took an entire month before anyone at school stopped cowering in front of me.” Fluttershy admitted, looking out from her hair.

Wait, was this before Sunset arrived or after? Because the more I think about it, the more I would love to see Iron Willified Fluttershy get into a shouting match with Old!Sunset Shimmer.

"Looks who's here, the crazy cat lady whose only friends are all stray animals."
"Big words coming from a run-away horse!"
"You better watch your mouth, or I'll have your pets taken away from you!"
"Oh please, all I need is a little hay or a handful of sugarcubes and you're putty in my hands."
"This is your last warning!"
"All I can hear are pained whinnies, maybe someone should call the glue factory and tell them one of their horses escaped."
"Oh no you didn't!"

5400329 Not THAT kind of research!

Rarity pulled the string to her show curtain to reveal, in many senses of the word, Sunset Shimmer in a very skimpy version of a japanese school girl outfit. It was black and only consisted of , for lack of a better term, breastplate with red suspenders that covered only just enough. The suspenders were connected to a skirt that is certainly too short for any sane person.

Sunset as Ryuko is pretty nice.

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