When Sunset Shimmer misused her powers and got banished to the human world, she was stricken with grief, sorrow, and remorse, but what truly made her into a vengeful demon?
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I would like to see an alternate version where Sunset was discovered watching by Celestia, and an awkward moment with Fully Twilight ensues.
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I'll see to it
Not a bad story. I've always thought that Sunset had some genuine envy for Twilight. Hard to feel sorry for her, to be honest.
5422435 Kinda why I made this. There are times when I get bothered when villains are hard to feel sorry for. Sunset's reaction when she got blasted by the elements triggered that. That, plus I took some inspiration from Mando's song.
Thanks for the feedback
5425521 No problem, though now I feel like I should revise things a little. I actually did feel kinda sorry for her in the first film, after everything was said and done. It's the major reason why I wrote my own little redemption story for her; she felt like she deserved a second chance.
No problem, and there's a song? Link please!
5426406 I'll be sure to check your story out as well when I get the time. And here's the song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmBsQYxx-p0
5426452 Awesome. Thank you.
Ouch, this tugs at my heartstrings so much it hurt a bit </3
5436625 Sorry
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It's okay, I forgive you. Still hurts though
5440517 Don't worry, Doc Pinkamena Diane Pie is here to fix that!
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O_O I'm okay, I'm okay! REALLY, JUST DANDY
5442125 Well alright,
But if you're having any problems with your heart, or any problem at all, just give us a call
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Yeah...I'll keep that in mind
I really hate back stories that paint Celestial as a good guy, because something has to cause the villain to want to make bad choices. It's a two way street, cause and effect. Phenomenal work!!!
6556004 Good, bad, it's all relative to one's viewpoint
Glad you enjoyed it!
And yes, Celestia may be a good pony, but even she's got to make some bad decisions, right?
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Read my recent Anon A miss story involving Princess Celestia as a bad guy.