Pinkie is asked to wait a few minutes for the doctor to see her. This is routine, right? After all, she's waited for things before, right?
Well, Pinkie's not very good at waiting.
She may not survive this...
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I almost expected her to say It's over 9,000
This is really good, pretty much how I feel waiting for the doctor 
Makes me laugh that she almost died of boredom...literally 
Nice work! 
Oh no! She almost died!
Clever concept, executed well, I like it.
One minor nitpick though:
It's the only time her hair deflates in the fic, so you might want to search your cutting room floor for a missing scene where someone lets the air out of her hair.
So funny nice story!
I go to the doctor a lot. Waiting to see the doctor is boring. That's why I read fimfiction.
This is one of the funniest fanfics I've ever read
Though, I was a bit concerned for Pinkie. It was a fictional disease/whatever it is, but still!
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Good eye. I missed that in editing. Thanks.
I was going to have the story be longer, but then I decided that this would work better as a shorter one-shot. There were no other scenes written, I had just planned on writing more in the beginning.
I have changed the line to: "Her hair deflated a full level."
5432342 I was trying to not sound critical about it.
still, as a wanna be medicaly profession in training, I'll say this: that was funny. please take this prescription of a like a favorite, and come notify me of a new story in the morning to see how I feel
"Cake's" should be capitalized.
She would have a heck of a time with "sooner or later."
No... Is it? Could it be?
Oh.
Okay.
That was silly. Awesomely so. You have earned a favorite and a like.
~KBO.
Ah, I loved this story a lot! Everypony is so in-character. Well done! Bravo!
Perfection. Keep up the amazing work!
you, my dear author have just earned a follow. well done
Hello. I was wondering if I am allowed to make a reading for this story that you write?
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Sure, you can make a reading of this. Let me know when you've finished. I'd love to hear it.
I'm so sorry for the delay of making this reading.
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No problem, I understand delays. (As evidenced in my other writings. I need to post more often...
Thanks for making this. I like the sound effects - it makes the story more engaging. And you do a good job with the voices.
I'll put a link in the story description.
5701139 Thank you for doing that ^_^.
Pretty good stuff! Although some parts seem a little off-tangent
And yet... given that this is Pinkie it could all actually be canon.
You wrote this well. I thought it an engaging read. Thank you for sharing. 