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Swiftriff


Hey everybody! My names Swiftriff and I'm a digital artist who takes a little time off to get back into doing some writing. I do hope everybody will be entertained by what I have to offer. ^_^

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5550935 Don't worry my friend, you won't have to wait long. I've just been extremely busy with doing different projects and the such. But I'll have more chapters out for you and everypony else out there. ^_^
~Swiftriff~

One should not listen to strange, disembodied, voices. It tends to lead to Hospital visits of a different sort. The kind of visit that involves padded rooms, a strait-jackets.

5559964 what if this was all an elaborate dream? it was all just in his head? MWUAHAHAHA!!! :pinkiecrazy:

well, vincent will sonner or later tell them the promble and he will solve the promble and find out he do beside choose the mare

I feel that this would be a really good story...but as it is, the pacing is WAY too fast. You need to slow down, think what you are going to write, then expand on that idea a lot more hen what you have been doing now.

5674785 Thank you very much for your input on this. I'll try to keep this in mind in the future chapters that are to come. Although I've been off of this story for quite some time, but I'm starting to come back into it and will have more uploaded for you all. Trust me, there is still a WHOLE lot more story that is to be covered. :pinkiecrazy:

thank you so much for the new Chapters 😄

9442492
Absolutely, and there's plenty more to come my dood :twilightsmile:

Nice ending on the chapter 👌

Nice explanation of The Void

Come on Vincent and Fight to save your friends

Love the take on the Changelings peace there is a war coming after all!

So everyone knows the changeling has to die right she killed already and she admits that she ate them so yeah she's got to die

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Perhaps, although she hasn't admit to killing or eating the ponies who attacked her, twice, in someone else's home. Though, it's also her skill to not get caught while on duty :pinkiecrazy:

Fuck! I have finished what there is to read currently noooooo! I hope to see more soon this is very well written and has my interest so I do hope to see more very soon also keep up the amazing work!

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