Ever wonder where clouds and colors, even dreams come from? Scootaloo has been told some crap about evaporation, the water cycle and brain impulses while sleeping. When Derpy and Tree Huger let her in on a secret, things get a bit sketchy. Mostly because the strong stuff is illegal...
Yes. I can't think of anything else but yes.
I like the story, it's really funny and executed well.
If you take care of the small grammatical errors, you'd be in the featured box by now.
You puffed too rough, maaaaan.
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Speaking of which, what happened to the box? From what I remember, a few months ago basically you needed to write an epic to get in, or have an incredibly original and well-written one-shot to get in, and the box barely ever changed. Now it's basically one-shots, stories that barely get attention, or giants that get re-featured whenever a chapter's posted, and it changes more then most women change emotions during their monthly.
And then there's Colon.
what to come
In at least three places, you refer to Scootaloo as Dash. You might want to fix that.
6173867 Thanks, Bruh. I'll update it
oh dear god no not the fucking puns