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TheBigStallowski


...far out, man.

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This story is a sequel to Spike Gets The Polio then has only 72 hours to Touch Rarity's Butt Before He Explodes


Twilight Sparkle, a powerful equestrian princess, feels it is time to get her princess mane. Because Celestia and Luna refuse, she attempts to "troll" them in order to get what she wants. Hilarity ensues.

This story is part of a collection known as The Dank Bank. It is recommended, but not required, to read some of these stories first.

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Comments ( 7 )

I randomly felt obligated to mention that her mane actually does start to get all magical prior to fighting Tirek, when she's trying to manage the sun and moon.

... That is all.

Twilight's trailblazin'.

5664957 That is the impression of what the Alicorn's mane is supposed to be.

There is a silly rtandom note here, Pinkie Pie has her own brand, even if it isn't shimmering or anything the likes.

What is it with the repeatred of

Luna (peace be upon her)

The first time is one thing, but repeating this is going over board here.

Thouhts needs "Quaotation", just as much as spoken words, if you have forgotten it?

Cleverer?

This whole (peace be upon her) is really annoying

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If you're expecting grammar from crackfics, you're in for a bad time...

5679715 In that case, you may consider makeing thin a better way.

Bad gammar isn't a good sign of a Crack-Fic, is it?

I know it is your story, to do with as you please, so long as you don't break any serious rules.

I, just like othes just it nice to point out a few details that felt as if it would make the story better.

The title did make it sound interesting. From this point, it looks like a story I would like to read.

5669552 Woah, I'm no the only one to notice this?

Is this just bad grammar, or a dumb way ess things?

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