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After the defeat of Nightmare Moon, a depressed and regretful Princess Luna is going to know her new home at the Canterlot Castle. But why everyone seems so happy to see her? And her sister really wants to give her an half of her reign?
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I liked it. Your interpretation of how Luna spent her time on the Moon made a lot of sense to me. Her inner demons waging war inside her each and every day for a thousand years is what got me. I think I can imagine Luna with a bucket on her head. Hehe, but this was well written. Good work
5686536 Thank you for the appreciation!
I'm pretty happy with how this explanation of the fall of an Alicorn / rising of a Nightmare has came out (with a little help of Kazushi Hagiwara explanation of the fall of an angel in "Bastard!!"), but in the end I was afraid that might result too long and boring to read, so I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
I has a bit of a weakness for stories like this. *clapclapclap*
5687043 Thank you for all!
that was adorable. o.O
granted you've got quite a few errors in spelling and word placement, I found myself laughing and smiling sympathetically for luna all the way through ^^
5702094 Thank you for the appreciation!
(God know if I tried to avoid mistakes, and to find an editor...
)
The explanation for Luna's fall was a little winded, but the result of Luna reaching and out and grabbing ahold of herself was brilliant.
5716193 Many thanks for having appreciated it!
For the explanation, oh, well, is what I was afraid it could seems, so I think the critique is fair. I have a lot to improve, and to keep in mind that, everytime someone tries to mix hard science with a world full of colored unicorns, a breezy dies.
(joking)
This story needs more people reading it, cause it's great.
5729606 I'm flattered.
I knew I saw your cat-face before...
It's above a story on my "Favorite Fics"-panel on my profile.
So the guy who wrote Trixie's Night, takes on another blue(ish) horned pony?
*grabs Popcorn* *adjusting shades*
Bring it on!
Ok... Tell me two things..
Why the hell does this story have so little recognition?
And why do you have so few followers?
Besides a few typos (You wrote Elements of Armony once near the end... although I appreciate reading things in Prance once in a while...)
The story is fine.
And again you managed to give a complete different angle to something we saw in the show.
Your take on the Alicorns magic is intriguing. You manage to explain magic and keeping it the same time.
And...
tickling? No, I never ever did see this coming. Kudos.
So. I hope you know what you did here. Feel ashamed for cluttering up my Fav-stories-panel once again, cat-face.
Have a like a fav... And I am stalking you now!
Oh and this handy moustache you truly earned.
5894451 Happy to hear of you again!
To know it... I'm always in search of more recognition.
Ops! Fixed. Thanks!
It's a sin I love to commit.
Jokes apart, thanks. That's a story I'm proud of. I will try to live up to your expectations.
I will take it with honor
After considering this story for the Goodfic Bin, I'm afraid I'm rejecting it from the submissions folder.
Details are here.
6657630 Thank you for reviewing it anyway.