[[WARNING: Contains what-the-buck. Please don't read while having expectations or while being intelligent. What-the-buck is not right for everyone. Consult your local MLP analyst if you're considering what-the-buck.]]
Sunset Shimmer led an ordinary life, until a huge friggin' ball of fiery death fell out of Space and conked her on the head.
And now, she's got the ability to transform into Maho-Shojo Sunsetta, the most powerful and adorable magical warrior girl in the Universe!
Can she save Canterlot High from threat after threat as the entire galaxy tries to take from her the Shimmer Sapphire that giver her her power?
Or will she--nah, she's gonna win. I've pretty much Mary Sued her.
(A parody of all those 'magical girl' amines; particularly, Tokyo Mew Mew. And because I was bored.)
Serious-ness Rating: negative three. Take seriously at your own (severe, I might add) risk.
(Rated Teen because I have yet to see an anime without a pointless fanservice scene.)
EDIT:
For those of you who know for a fact that it's spelled "Mahou-Shoujo", just go along with it; it'll all be cleared up in the finale.
In all honesty, if I get more than three likes, I'll be over the moon. This is possibly the least-good writing I've ever done.
But I had to post it. Because the world must know of the heroic absurdity that is Maho-Shojo Sunsetta.
5777630 Hold onto your buttocks, I'm clicking dat button!
5777630
Here's all I have to say, your off to a good start. You made me laugh at some points. If you need someone for ideas or a editor you can PM me.
5777630 Sometimes I feel like my writing quality goes super down when I'm writing trollfics.
LIKE!
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Funny and well done at the same time. Looking to seeing more chapters of this!
(insert victorious laugh)
So much non-hate!
THX guise!
Expect Chapter Two by Thursday if all goes well!
If not, I'll let you know, but it's definitely coming!
CHAPTER TWO IS HERE
(Insert cheering)
Yay!!! This is awesome, I can't wait for another new chapter!
Chapter 3: Coming before Easter, if we're lucky.
'S not too hard to write these; it's all the editing and stuff that takes long.
And, about an hour later, Chapter 3 is done! All it needs it editing and then it'll be here!
Look forwards to it!
I can't write action scenes...
So many new chapters in one day? I'm on a roll!
(A cinnamon roll.)
Sorry about no new chapters. I've been working on another project and it just ate up my time.
New chapters coming soon, I hope!
Yea my mind went with Sunset on that one. I mean seriously her life has been nothing but being a butt monkey since she got her powers, hope it is all her having a bad dream.
Damn puberty. It makes you have a dirty mind all the time...
PFFFfffTTttt hahahahahahahahahaha the pony on card, and -and the manual was -was pft hahahaha
oh my god this is so hilariously bad I love it
Pinkie would have a fake Pokem- excuse me -Ponymon card those stats are way wrong
I knew she was blowing whatever it was they were talking about out of proportions but it was fun in trying to guess what they were talking about though
This is by far your greatest chapter ever
Don't worry, Trixie isn't staying out of the picture for long...
Sorry about the slow progress...
I don't upload or write over weekends.
Don't expect too many chapters on Saturday or Sunday.
I'm splitting the finale into two parts so that I have a little more time to think of an ending without having to hold out on uploading anything until then.
LOVED IT
That way, everypony wins!
We're all equal!
Left is right!
Love is hate!
Flash Sentry is a good character!
(For those of you who haven't seen Season 5, Episode 1...who am I kidding, you've all seen it, probably multiple times.)
BTW...
*Looks at the title*
Mahou Shoujo Sunsetta.
Oh wait, that title is spelled completely wrong... I better tell him!
He also spelled anime wrong-waaaaaaaaaait, he spelled it right later on.
And he did warn me I shouldn't take this seriously.
I've just been trolled.
5831871
You've...
Been...
Trolled, you've been trolled,
you have probably been told:
"Don't reply to this guy!
He just wants to get a rise
out of you!" Yes, it's true.
You reply, and that's his cue
To start trouble on the double
while he strokes his manly stubble.
You've been trolled, you've been trolled,
you should probably just fold,
when the only winning move is not to play!
Yet you keep on trying, mindlessly replying...
You've been trolled, you've been trolled,
have a nice day!
5831901 Is the Sunsetta a nod to Bayonetta? Or is that wishful thinking?
5831912
In all honesty, it's just Sunset with "ta" at the end to make it sound Japanese.
Never heard of Bayonetta.
Not happy with how this one turned out.
I'm gonna delete this chapter unless somepony really wants the Dazzlings' story arc continued, which is pretty unlikely.
5832190 I would like you to continue the Dazzling story arc please
5833742
Okie dokie lokie!
I'll put that in a separate story, so as not to clog up this one with chapters not related to the main plot.
THX for letting me know!
5834831 your welcome my friend
Oh thank God! I thought this was becoming a very different kind of story!
I like how Celestia is suddenly absurdly inconvenient. This is hilarious!
THAT LAST PART WITH FLUTTERSHY
THIS STORY IS GORGEOUS
If this gets a sequel, will you introduce the last two members of the Sapphire Pentagon?
5944997
Oh, I wouldn't worry about that...why do you think I've been away for [insert big number here] months?
Also, just wanted to say:
S' GOOD TO BE BACK!
6156031 Woo! Looking forward to it.
Official Update:
Chapters 1 + 2 of Mahou Shoujo Sunsetta II to be released some time before Monday-assuming moderation is a success.
Of course, it might take a bit longer for it to be posted, since it has to go through moderation and stuff, but it will be submitted for moderation before Monday.
...Mmm... Good story, needs more Trixie.
Two chapters only, pfft, like she's some bottom billing opening act!
Have a thumb.