While relaxing on the beach and thinking of her past, Gilda encounters Scootaloo and the two agree to converse. However, their discussion takes an unexpected turn.
Thanks to HarmsytheWoonalova and Hianloland for pre-reading this story.
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Always a good read when you publish a story. Good job.
5896126 Thank you for the compliments. I appreciate it!
I gots a strong feeling this will hit the popular or even featured box.
5896196 It's already in the Popular Box at the time of this post.
Anyway, thanks for reading my story. I highly appreciate it.
5896199 Maybe someday I'll get there, in the meantime, I bask in your awesomeness!
5896214 I hope you do get there one day. Keep trying your best and learning along the way, and you'll get there one day. I wish you best in regards to your writing endeavors.
5896221 I'm going against convention and starting with, and focusing solely on, a long chaptered story that will end up being a series of books.
It kind of feels like doing a cartoon series of my own. 
5896221 So, has your great story been featured yet? How about now!? When will it get featured!?
Excellent read~ I really like your ability to describe the environment as well!
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Getting featured is tough. Still, I like how it's doing so far and I highly appreciate your enthusiasm.
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Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
5896440 Well, I gave it a like and will proceed to fav' it. I do hope it hits featured~
5896478 Thank you. I appreciate it.
Right, so, when do we get to see Gilda being the new awesome cool Gilda and fixing her past mistakes, or at least trying to, because the other party needs to forgive as well.
In short,
MORE SEQUAL!
Scoots was adorable in this (as she usually is in everything) and I loved your characterization of Gilda.
Awesome read. Redemption is always sweet.
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I might do a sequel in the future, as writing for both Scootaloo and Gilda was fun. Anyway, thanks for reading this story.
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Thank you for the compliments. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this story.
Looks like Scootaloo has two big sisters for her.
I'll go pick my feels up now, this made me look at Gilda in a new light.
5898957 Thank you for reading the story! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
IT NEEDS A SEQUEL!
Scoots failed to learn about Griffonia.
The other thing is I could see Scootaloo bringing her friends over to Gilda. I could see all kinds of activities they could do with a griffon -- so many cutie mark opportunities.
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Yeah, looks like Scootaloo will have to read it in a book.
I agree. There would be a number of cutie mark opportunities available.
Anyway, thanks for reading the story.
I think I'll be the first to say it's okay. I don't particularly like Scoot's reactions to most things Gilda says, but eh, that's cause I'm biased about best pony. Didn't quite like how Gilda reacted too; more so on how she realised she was a bully in the past, and had to change. Felt a little forced.
Yet again, without that, this fic wouldn't exist. I'd say, not bad.
5899589 Thanks for the critique. I'll look at what I need to work on and try to do a better job for next time.
it's a shame that scootaloo only had one of her questions answered. you would think she would have pressed a bit more on the other one too, being that she read a bit about it before, but i'm not a small pegasus filly, so who am i to judge. i still liked it though. the lesson was a pretty enjoyable too.
5903979 Yeah, looks like she'll have to find out on her own.
Anyway, thanks for the comment and for reading my story. I'll keep on trying to improve my writing.
Well...this could use a bit of proofreading (which I'm too tired/lazy to give right now), but otherwise it's great!
Yeah Diamond Tiara and silver spoon I guess this was before Crusaders and the lost mark because they are still jerks
Don't worry Gilda you'll see her again in season 5 and you will become friends with her again
Well this was a very nice story and a very unique pairing here having Scootaloo talking with Gilda without being scared and the reputation that she had back in Ponyville she was never scared of Gilda it was really sweet seeing Gilda soft side and she even look back the time when she was in Ponyville and yeah she realize that she was not the nicest Griffin but Scootaloo forgave her even though it's just only one pony I think it's enough for Gilda to become a better creature and someday see we'll see Rainbow dash again and she can tell her that was pretty good keep up the good work