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Spiral really has no idea what they're doing and they hope you like what you're reading.

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Sometimes it's best to leave ancient myths in the past where they belong. Archaeologist Dry Bones, eager to fill his repertoire of discovering things of old, discovers this all too late.

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some of the words can't be unscrambled but good job, wouldn't mind seeing more of this.

It stops at the good part

Ri2

...Well? And THEN what?!

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Naw, Luna's way bigger.


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Unfortunately this is simply a oneshot.

It's not a badly written story, but it's also not much of a story. The cover image basically tells the same plot in a single image: archaeologists awaken a godlike colossus and... that's it.

This could have used a little more plot or some tension or something. The fact that it's a one shot is rather disappointing, because it would make for the start of a potentially interesting story.

Someone got their GTS in my MLP!

(Personally I'm more of a PB & J man).

THE SCIENCE SHOW!

*gets crushed*

WHO'S IDEA WAS THIS?!

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