I moved here from Fanfiction just to see how well my stories will do here. Of course, I'm not looking for popularity, I would just love some feedback, just to see if I'm going in the right direction.
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This was... unexpected.
But it's still hawt.cool.
100% Perv Approved
Perv approved and I would love more
Nooooo now I'm confused was it Sombra or actually Discord in a disguise..... Yea it was Sombra
-slowly backs out of the room-
Please please please make more...
Yes please, please make more.
We're really interested to see this unfold.
Is it the real Sombra? Is it Discord? Is it a dream? Did the shield spell fail to keep out intruders?
We must know!
I'm not gonna lie, this chapter seemed a bit rushed. I would've liked to see a more natural progression to the good stuff (as well as a bit more detail), but it was still an enticing chapter.
5904831 It's funny that you say that because I actually tried to make sure this chapter wasn't rushed at all, but it also could be because I'm not really all that good at smut so I'm not really sure how long it should last. Well, at least the chapter was still enjoy so that's a good thing
6560064 I'm not sure. I've been kind of anxious to post anything lately. Hopefully, I'll update something soon. Sorry for the wait
don't really care about the backstory , though i do care about suggesting that shining and cadance as drifting apart just so sombra can be shoe horned in , that's not necessary , or at least could be done with some reason for it....