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Stalliongrad

Tensions between Equestria and the Stallionists have been rising ever since they receded from Equestria and became their own country known as the ' Stallionist Union', after that they builded up their military and now threaten not just Canterlot but all of Equestria as Stalion has plans to expand his Empire of Stallionists

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Windlife

Windlife #1 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1 ·

"It vas there vhen ve all got here zhis morning, it must have gotten here during ze night via magic."

Dat German.
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Try Hard

Try Hard #2 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Please charm me with your knowledge of the German language! It really helps readability.

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As to his acting out to their superior officers:

GDIBrony

GDIBrony #3 · Apr 19th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Ugh. Ponies with human names just... no. No. Yes, some ponies do have what can be considered human names, like the nickname of AJ and the name Cadence. But there is a differnce between those and Micheal or James.

You set the description up as "Russians" or the pony version are the bad guys and open up with the Nazis. So are the Nazis and Equestria the same and good guys, or did Call of Duty screw up and make every thing they are the same. Tbh, I didn't finish it. I was laughing too much.

Well, not really, but you get the point.

Brush up on your history, and find a editor for this... thing.

markweiland2

markweiland2 #4 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1 ·

This was just a rough draft to get my story on here so I will be making adjustments to it. Also I couldn't come up with what to call the Nazi's in this so if anyone has a good idea what to call them I would appreciate the help thank you.