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Today is Hearts and Hooves Day, also known as Rainbow Dash's worst holiday. Soarin Skies goes to Ponyville to ask Rainbow Dash on a date. Will it turn out as well as he planned? Or will might give him nightmares.
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I'm going to provide an honest review so sorry if it seems a bit harsh.
The description itself has an error that needs to be fixed. Colored text needs to go. Switching from each point of view throughout the same chapter seems to be a bit of a distraction for me, but that's just my opinion.
Characters actually seemed to be good. Rainbow going all crazy about seeing a Wonderbolt like always. Fleet doing a bet with Soarin seemed to be similar with Calm Wind's fics.
That's just my opinion. Hope it helps.
Why does the last part remind me of Not A Nerd
But instead of Sunset another pony XD
IDK, I WANT A SEQUEL XD
OMC if that mare is Spitfire I swear I will instantly
, coz it's kinda become a cliché.
just wish there was more 
Nice story though
5948417 It isn't.
5947650 Maybe. This is a one-shot!
5949061 Break the laws of physics and make a sequel! Who gives a damn! I'm currently writing a timeline like calm winds and Breeze is the first in the series and will have a sequel and that's a one shot
5950084 Still thinking.
OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH! BEST SOARINDASH STORY EVER!!!!!
5952793 Like, literally?
5952795 YES!!!!!!!!!
5952798 THANKS!
5952800 You're welcome.
5952804 Glad you liked it!
Good fic. Some extraneous information such as the tip and how long the kiss lasted. Otherwise, I think it was pretty good. It's gonna be cool to see what else you put out.
*leans head back and gives Luigi death stare* . . . . . . . . . . . . . NO.
5979436 Touché
Well, Fleet just lost 20 bits!
I'm only on the first few sentences, and already I find myself cracking up at this.
Such a simple phrase, but one that reeks of a person that lives in fervent denial, and just so perfectly Rainbow Dash.
"Huh, it's the morning? I refuse to be awake!"
It was good. Simple and cute, just what I needed to kick off my day. Have a like!
what is with the cliffhanger at the end
You gave a blue Pegasus pink eye shadow?