“Very good, Silent Knight,” Tranquil Dusk said as I walked silently across a balance beam. With my leg in a cast, it was a lot harder than normal.
Being sneaky was not as easy as I hoped, but I was making good progress at it. The theories were sound enough: use your wings for balance, flap slowly to take the weight off your hooves, and try not to shift the wind too much. I’d also been shown several ways to fly with less wind resistance and sound.
Crimson Dawn looked over his shoulder at me before continuing to pummel the heavy bag with his forehooves. He was learning how to box. It was a little more aggressive than what we usually did, but there was no doubt it was good exercise, and it sated his desire for combat training.
“Thanks,” I said as I awkwardly turned around and walked back across the beam. A few more times up and down were in order today. Tomorrow, it might be tiphooving across rooftops.
“You seem to be healing well. Perhaps in the future, you and Steel Wings will be more careful?”
I sighed and shook my head. “You’ve been spying again.”
“Training,” she corrected cheerfully. “It would be easier if you’d just introduce us.”
“As a matter of fact, I will be. He is going to take over your training while I’m gone on vacation.”
The thumps against the heavy bag stopped and Crimson asked, “Really?”
“Yes, really.”
Tranquil tilted her head. “He is a soldier. Are you not concerned he’ll train us in things you do not wish us to know?”
“I’ve asked him not to, but at this point, both he and you are going to do what you want to do,” I replied with a grunt as my hind leg hit the beam. “Maybe that means I’m a failure as a guardian but, young or not, you two are smart enough to make up your mind. You also seem to know what you want even if I think it is a mistake. Ponies learn best by making their own mistakes.”
Crimson turned and made his way over. “So you’ll train us to fight like you fight, then?”
I shook my head. “No, I promised I wouldn’t, but I won’t stop you from learning from others. If you and Steel Wings come to an arrangement I’ll accept it. I should warn you, though, he is rough and I don’t agree with his methods.”
Tranquil hopped up onto the beam. “Did you promise you would not involve us with your mission against the gryphon?”
Always the clever one. I shook my head. “No, I did not.”
“Then I choose to help and fight at your side,” Tranquil said proudly.
“As do I,” Crimson put in.
“You’re making a mistake.” Bringing two young civilian ponies into a fight like this was a horrible idea.
The mare took two graceful steps towards me like a predator approaching her prey. “It is ours to make. You said that.”
“So it is, but my mistake to make is allowing you to follow me.” I motioned her off my beam so I could continue to practice. “If you two are committed, you better start working harder. If you think the level of fitness necessary for the Guard is going to cut it for what we have to do, you’d better think again.”
“Will it really be so different?” Crimson asked.
“Yes, yes it will. Facing a gryphon is not like facing a pony. They have sharp claws that can easily grasp and hold. Their beaks can exert enough pressure to snap bone. Most important of all, they can fly better than you or me.”
I hopped off the beam and started to approach the younger stallion as I continued, “This won’t be some fairy tale like those books you read. They’ll cut you up and tear out your eyes. They’ll break your bones and leave you bleeding.”
When I reached Crimson, I poked him hard in the chest with a hoof while looming over him. “When you meet these gryphons in battle, it’s likely that only one of the two of you is coming back alive. So yes, it really will be different. Get that in your mind and really think about it. I’m not going to bring you along to have you get in my way.”
The nox pony blinked as he stared up at me. He had no response, nor did his sister.
“Show up and meet with Steel Wings to keep up your normal training. If you make some other deal with him, that is your decision. If not, you can keep doing what you’re doing now. You’ll live a lot longer.”
I left the room with that lingering in both their minds… and mine. Even though I hoped that speech would frighten them off, I knew in my heart that it wouldn’t. They were going to follow me down this path into darkness no matter what I said.
And the worst part was that there was a voice in my head that told me I should be glad for it. Tranquil’s stealth was unrivaled and Crimson had raw potential to be more than a guard, but a soldier like me. Their youth would make them quicker and faster. They would be great assets.
I didn’t want to fail my promise to Moonlit Star, though. This was going to result in somepony getting hurt. I couldn’t imagine having to go to the matriarch and tell her that I’d let her grandfoals come to harm, or worse.
The decision was now in their hooves, and whichever direction they went, I had to believe that I tried.
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“I can’t believe you arranged all of this,” Winterspear said as we walked to the train station.
“What you’re saying is that you don’t think I’m a capable enough officer to schedule two spots in a Royal Guard school?” I asked with a slight grin.
Iridescence bumped me. “That isn’t what she meant!”
“You don’t think I’m a thoughtful enough brother and friend to schedule it so you two could advance your careers and be together?” I asked, still grinning.
Winterspear groaned. “When did you become such a smart mouth? I liked you better when you didn’t talk.”
“Me, too,” Iridescence said.
My right wing flicked forwards to lightly rest over my heart. “I’m deeply hurt.”
With a snort, Winterspear said, “Oh, I’m so sure. Although, speaking of hurt, I don’t like the idea of leaving you while you’re injured.”
“Crystal and Runic are looking after me,” I replied.
Iridescence chuckled. “The Runic part is why she is worried.”
“I’m pretty sure if I was going to burst into flames or turn into a dragon, I’d have done so by now.”
Winterspear rolled her eyes and swatted at me. “Dragon may be an improvement.”
That was a point I couldn’t argue with. I could do a serious amount of good if I were a dragon.
“Seriously, though, thank you for this,” my sister continued. “Things have just been so crazy lately. First you, then Dad. Plus, and I should make it clear I’m not complaining, having Dot. Work, fire, and, you know.”
I nodded.
“What are you going to do while we’re gone?” Iridescence asked.
“I’m taking leave, you know that.”
Winterspear’s eyes flicked over at me. “She does know. So do I. We want to know what you’re going to do.”
“Why?” I asked.
“It isn’t that we think you’ll get into trouble… but I’m not sure I approve of your new friend. He seems rough,” Winterspear explained.
“Well, he is an armsmaster. You think he and I are going to spend my entire leave training?”
Iridescence put in, “I could see you doing that, yes.”
“Well, we’re not. You both know that I’m going to go see Shining Armor,” I groused.
“Oh yeah, do we? You’re going to the Crystal Empire for sure?” Winterspear asked, her ears wiggling happily. Evidently, that was what she wanted.
“We are, yes.”
“Oh, I see,” Iridescence said with a throaty tone. She looked over knowingly at Winterspear. “He’s taking Crystal, so now they’re we.”
“Yes, we. You know, he doesn’t come home at night anymore,” Winterspear shot back.
“No, I didn’t know.” Iridescence smirked. “Well, how about that?”
“Still here,” I put in, feeling my face flush. “And that is none of your business. Neither of yours.”
“So you’re not taking Crystal?” Iridescence asked, knowing full well I was.
“Of course I am.”
Winterspear pointed a wing. “He said of course. Not yes.”
“What does that mean?” I asked.
“Nothing,” they replied.
When we got to the train station, I said, “Gee, it’s a shame you have to go so soon. I’ll really miss you both. Bye bye!”
Winterspear laughed and looped me in a hug. “Don’t be cross. We mean well. It is nice to see young love.”
“As opposed to the dried-up, old-mare love you two share?” I countered.
“Ouch!” Iridescence frowned. “See if I bring you anything back.”
“You’d best bring me back a certificate of successful completion so I can promote you.”
Winterspear squeezed me tighter and shook her head. “No, no. No mixing work and home here. You were saying how old we were?”
“No, you were making light of my relationship.” I nuzzled her cheek and hugged her. “You started it.”
My sister let me go with a nod. “Fair enough. New love, then. Have fun, okay?”
“Yeah, you, too. Both of you.”
“Oh, we will!” Iridescence said pointedly before hugging me.
“Alright, go… but seriously, if you two don’t both pass, Silent Knight the Officer is going to kick your flanks all the way across the palace grounds and back.”
“Yes, sir, understood, sir!” Iridescence replied before heading off into the station with Winterspear.
It was a pleasure to be rid of the meddling mares, but I’d absolutely miss them. I loved them both and, even though they were both pests, they meant well. A pony could have a worse sister and friend.
I limped my way back across town until I got to the Hay Café. The host recognized me and sat me at my usual table. It wasn’t long before the server came over and recognition dawned on his face, too.
“Pardon me, sir. May I ask you a question?” the serverpony asked me. His nametag read Silber. It never failed: if I was at the Hay Café, he was the pony that ended up waiting on me. It was uncanny enough that I started to wonder if he was Maya.
“Sure, go ahead.”
Silber was a pegasus like me. He had a grey coat, a dark blue mane, and his cutie mark was a scimitar. It seemed out of place for a server. “You come here periodically. Always alone, but you seem to be waiting for somepony. Occasionally you mumble to yourself. I don’t get it. Is this some sort of royal guard thing?”
I chuckled softly and smiled. “It probably looks pretty odd right?”
“With no hint of disrespect… yes, it kind of does.”
I took my helmet off and set it on the table. “I’ll be honest with you. Most ponies can’t tell royal guards apart, but I have a stressful job at the palace. I’m a—”
“Princess Luna House Guard, yes. I know that armor. I know all of the armors, to be honest. It is kind of a hobby,” he interrupted.
“Right. I’m actually the commander of Princess Luna’s Guard. Ponies are coming to my office all day long for various things. So, every now and then, I just need a few minutes to myself. This restaurant isn’t near the palace, it isn’t a Royal Guard hangout, and I can just sit outside and mumble to myself. Do you understand?”
Silber nodded. “I do, actually. That is one of the reasons I work here. It gets busy sometimes, but it is still pretty private. I take it that is also why you don’t rush to eat and leave?”
I pointed a hoof at him and nodded. “Exactly.”
“Alright, well, I won’t encroach on your time, then. I’ll go get your usual put in with the kitchen.” He bowed his head and turned to walk off.
As soon as he was out of range, Maya’s voice hit my ear. “That was smooth. You’re getting pretty good at misleading ponies.”
I fought the urge to visibly frown. “I’m not sure I’m going to take that as a compliment. Once we’re done with this, I’m going to have to reevaluate my behavior.”
“Perhaps. On the other hoof, if you’d like a job, I could probably see to that, too. You’ve picked up a lot of valuable skills and your diligence is extremely admirable.”
“Thank you, but no. This is a one-time deal. Not that I don’t enjoy our little visits where I look like a crazy pony, it just isn’t the sort of life I want long term.” I shifted to rest my chin on my hoof. “Now, I assume there is big news since you wanted a meeting instead of a drop?”
“Yes, and you’ll like this. You may like it a lot. The Pony Express ran into a local carrier from Sudramoar. It seems he was looking for a lost package. Not just any lost package, mind you, but the same one we’re after. And he was carrying a coded message.”
“Coded? Was that a problem?”
“To be frank, gryphon codes are rubbish at best, childish at worst. We’ve had the ability to decipher them a while.”
That was interesting. “So what was it, then?”
“That is the best part. It was a location for a pick-up and a promise of safety from that kingdom’s postmaster general himself.”
My ears twitched. “He honestly addressed it himself?”
There was a pause. Too long of a pause. “We can’t say it was for sure, but it seemed earnest enough. It was heavily insinuated.”
“Alright, so what is next?” I asked.
Maya didn’t reply immediately so I waited patiently. As patiently as I could, at least.
Finally, my patience wore out. “What is next?”
“It gets a little complicated, Silent Knight.”
“Try me,” I replied.
“Don’t get too upset, but this information is a little dated. The Pony Express on the ground made some judgment calls based on a short timeline and limited opportunity. I didn’t bring this to you until I had the outcome.”
I took a soft breath and just sipped from my water.
“The Pony Express substituted the letter for a forgery, telling the package that the postmaster general was no longer willing to accept it back. With no right of return, the package was limited when it came to options.”
“Did it pay off?” I asked.
“It seems to have, yes. The deadline was missed. It was extremely risky for the Sudramoar postmaster to extend so far in into Nordanver to retrieve the package. It is unlikely he’ll try again, especially since he has no idea what happened with the package.”
Something crossed my mind. “How did you convince the carrier to deliver the fake letter?”
“We didn’t. We made a substitution,” she said coolly.
I frowned and idly tapped my water glass. “I take it the carrier didn’t make it back to the south?”
“He retired. Don’t go soft on me, Silent Knight. You could take a lesson from your armsmaster friend.”
Did everypony know about that? “He was just doing his duty.”
Maya made a sound of discontent. “Others have retired for less, and his boss wouldn’t think twice about you. Is this going to be a problem?”
I sat in silence for a moment and thought that over. Before, in one of the skirmishes, some of Alastair’s brigands had been killed. That hadn’t fazed me. They were murderers. This was different. He was just some poor courier sent from the king.
“Silent Knight, is this going to be a problem?” she repeated.
This was it. All the way in or lose my nerve.
I knew I couldn’t walk away. Alastair, or Garrard, or whoever he really was had to answer for what he’d done. The ends would justify the means. If the king was behind this, that made all of his agents enemy combatants.
“Get him on the ship,” I said, the darkness I felt clinging to my tone.
“It will be done. He is running out of options. We’ve got some assets that may provide some influence. I’m working on setting up a less-than-reputable sea captain to be in the area. One that transports goods to Equestria without asking questions.”
In the middle of Maya’s reply, I saw Silber walking towards me with my lunch. He set it down and said, “Here you are, sir.”
I tried not to look like a pony who had just accepted the death of an unwitting courier. “Thank you. It looks good.”
Once he was gone and out of earshot, I made a sound of acknowledgement.
“Anything else?” Maya asked.
“I’ll be traveling soon. A few days away from here. If you require my attention, can you get word to the Crystal Empire?”
“I can get word anywhere. Leave your travel plans at the drop. If I need you, I’ll be able to get you.”
“Alright,” I replied before settling in on my lunch.
The rest of the day went, more or less, about the same as any other. I got through my duty and put everything that happened recently behind me so I could enjoy a date with Crystal Wishes.
With Winterspear and Iridescence out of town, we had made plans to spend the night at my place. It would be easier on my morning commute, which meant I could sleep in a little. It also meant I wouldn’t have to face Velvet and her judgmental grin or embarrassing questions.
Unfortunately, there was a weight in my chest that made it hard to enjoy Crystal’s company. We ate dinner and were going to have a cuddle on the couch, but my mind was full of anxiety.
I excused myself to get some fresh air on the balcony. I could feel her worried eyes on me as I stepped outside, but once I saw the moon hanging in the night sky, I felt at ease.
The nox pony twins were old enough to understand consequences. I was more than old enough to do the same. I wanted Alastair to pay for his crimes, and that meant there would be casualties along the way.
I just hoped there would be more on their side than mine.
The balcony door slid open and Crystal asked in a tentative voice, “Sweetie?”
“Hmm?”
“Are you alright?”
I turned to face her. “Sure, why?”
She shrugged, avoiding my eyes. “You’ve been out here a while with… Well, sometimes you get this look. You had it a lot right after the… the… After you were hurt. Then it kind of stopped some. You’ve had it a lot lately.” She swallowed. “You had it just now.”
“A look?” I asked.
Crystal just nodded softly.
I looped a wing over her back and softly tugged her closer to me. “Yeah, I think about it a lot. About Lavender, Risky, and Starry. I’m happy with life, but sometimes I feel like there is a shadow over me. Business left unfinished.”
The mare nuzzled up against me. “I’m sorry. Is there anything I can do?”
“Just be understanding. Mom once told me that when Stratus came home from Sudramoar, he was never the same. I never understood what she meant before. Now… I guess I do. I don’t want to turn out like him.”
“You won’t,” Crystal said emphatically. “You won’t, Silent Knight. You mustn't think that way. You’ve been through it and you’re still the same pony you were. You went there, it happened, and now you’re home. That is it.”
Softly, I replied, “If only it was.”
“What?” she asked.
I shook my head. “Nothing, I’m sorry. This is a pretty poor excuse for a date. Anyway, are you excited about the trip?”
Crystal stared at me a moment. She just shook her head and rubbed her cheek up against mine. “I won’t pretend like I understand, but I hope you know I’m here for you. As for this date, any date with you is fine. I am very excited, though. I want to get away for a bit and enjoy it. I can’t believe the package you put together.”
Package? What an interesting choice of words. I reassured myself that Crystal didn’t know anything. It was a coincidence. “I really wanted it to be special.”
“It will be. Now the hard part is just waiting. I’m counting the days, the hours, and the minutes until we step onto that train and leave for the beautiful Crystal Empire.”
My lips curled into a smile. “I hear they named it after you.”
She giggled. “I think it has been around longer than me.”
“Technically, no. It was out of reality for a while. You never know. They might have called it the Gem Empire before.”
“Well, you’re wrong, but the sentiment is lovely. Now, if you want, you can sit out here, stare at the moon and brood, or…”
“Or?” I asked.
She slipped out from under my wing, her side sliding along mine. “You’ll have to come inside to find out.” As she turned to head back inside, she swatted me softly with her tail.
Find out wh—Oh.
Brooding could wait. It could absolutely wait.
Muwhahahaha. Excellent. :3
I still wanna know who Maya is. Will we actually find out, or is it meant to stay a mystery till the end of time?
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"If you leave a gun on the mantle, you have to fire it before the end of the story."
We'll see her soon enough. The question is, is this 'Maya' really on the same side?
Bringing the gryphon to Equestria?
"The mare"? Not "My mare"? Or "Crystal"? I can't tell if this was intended to come across as so impersonal but, given what Silent is obsessing about, I can easily believe it was absolutely an intentional indication.
I can only see his plan failing horribly. He might pull the plan off, but if he does go through with it, I see much possibility for him ending up with some serious repercussions.
So Maya can get a word anywhere? Ok. She's good at what she does. And we still don't know who she is. Really, the only pony we know of that could posses such knowledge are the Princesses, but if it's either Luna or Celestia then... why? Why would they do this? I have one more guess who could it be, but it's not likely. Anyway, we're up for something big soon.
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If Maya is one of the Princesses, she would have to be Celestia. But she doesn't have to be one of the Princesses.
Don't forget; there are many players in this game we've not seen yet.
We certainly must entertain the possibility that Maya may be a griffon herself. Or himself. Magic isn't limited to unicorn horns, after all.
Looks like Silent Knight is getting quite good at investigating the plot. Oh, and his little spy business is going well, too. Sorry, sorry, this is really is going at a good pace and sound balance between all the different threads.
Will Silent Knight overthrow Princess Luna in favor of Nightmare Moon? Can Crystal Wishes seduce him away from the darkside? Do bat ponies cast shadows in the night? Tune in next time to find out the answers to these and other questions!
When I saw the title: What do you mean //before//!? NO CRISTAL EMPIRE YET!?? Well, the empire can wait but the shining armor and cadance meeting can be something good.
Short filler chapter. Classic. Has some charm. Feels very short altruth it isn't. Nothing really to say. Hope no crystal ranomly explodes in the next chapter...
And Silber is like the only inteligent pony around.
Nice chapter. I enjoyed it. I can't wait to read what happens next, at the crystal empire. Also I wonder will Crystal be affected by Silent's scheming or not? I guess that will be answered in later chapters.
According to I think most laws of alchemy, that isn't possible, unless he was surrounded by a dead dragon, and a Philosopher's Stone was involved.
SK really needs to stop the spy stuff. He is good & bad at it. I mean come on Crystal noticed.
6226233 Yes indeed. We're certainly building towards something. It will be hard for what happens to him to not have some impact on her.
6226228 The Crystal Empire will have to wait a little longer. You're as impatient as Crystal Wishes is to go ;) As far as filler goes, there is some really important information in the filler.
6226208 Yes indeed. There are many questions to be answered. Thankfully, unlike in Lost, they'll all be answered in time :D
6226138 He is certainly finding a place in the role. For better or for worse. I'm glad you're pleased with the pacing. That is always a challenge with a serial story!
6226026 6226076 While I'm not saying Maya ISN'T one of the princesses, I also don't track the theory that she HAS to be one of the two. It does seem to come up a lot. We also don't have any reason to believe that either princess is able to see everything. Maya could be anyone/pony/thing that can use magic and leverage an intelligence network.
6226022 That is a very fair point. This is a very serious affair and is unlikely to make zero impact on him.
6225978 That seems to be the plan. I can see your point on that turn of phrase but it wasn't intentional in this case. It is just me and my general refusal to use a pony's name repeatedly. Also "my" mare, which I do sometimes use, also seems kind of possessive in a creepy way. Thus, in this case, "the."
6225941 Ah the old Chekhov's Gun. I'm not saying you're wrong ;D
6225889 We'll just have to see. I'm typically good about not leaving loose ends but sometimes strings are very, very long.
6225821 We're on the part of the roller coater where the chain is pulling you up ;)
6226276 Hmm, I haven't considered actually dragon transformation for the canon. I might need to look into that.
6226319 She noticed he was upset. I don't think she has any idea what he is up to though.
6226326 I am known to be a tease. Although I do give it all up in the end ;) I haven't actually.
6225941 I'm beginning to think Maya could be NMM. Perhaps enacting revenge would upset Luna?
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Well, I just assumed that she's someone we've already met. If it's a new character, then there's no point in guessing, I think.
6226659 Ah ha! I didn't say she/he WASN'T some pony we have already met. We may have indeed!
The midpoint special.... this story is too good to be almost half over already...
Also, am I the only one who wants to see Silent and Crystal have a foal?
Woo get it Silent -laughs- Ok anyway this was a good filler/builder chapter, and it sets the stage as to how things are going. I do hope Silent lets this vacation be just that, but I have a feeling his contact is gonna drop some bad news in the middle of the vacation on him. anyway cant wait to see how it goes. good work as always
6226334 *3P mode activated*Psch.
Do not compare me to your maer.
I am the superior
of this comparision
as the proud owner of a
crystaline posterior.
I create real crystals from my blood,
it's a the more superior art,
than your carrot top's any quill,
and any blade.
Yoł!
*drops micro*
[I do not know what happened. I always am loyal to the old polish phrasial verb "Than white kielbasa I more fancy only white poems".]
**Poutery Posh Pony
Oh god... Mare speak. Silent, don't try and understand Iridescence and Winterspear when they speak Mare. It will only get you injured. =P On a side note, Evil Gryph is going to be captured! I cannot wait for the epic finale to this arc! And Crystal's teasing.... that last little bit was so heartwarming... followed by a moment of hilarious as Silent decided (like every stallion with a working libido) that a mare takes precedence over brooding!
Alright let's do this with a plan.
First, I assume that:
- Maya is someone we've already met
- There's no voice changing, so we're looking for a mare.
Now let's list all the mares we've seen:
Winterspear, Iridescence, Miley Hooves, Sunny Day, Major Measure, Azurite, Sunbeam, Velvet Step, Crystal Wishes, Nova, Cadence, Princess Luna, Princess Celestia, Radiant Orchid, Tranquil Dusk, Exemplar Ferrel.
That's all i got for now, I'll look through chapters tomorrow when I won't have to do this on iPad.
Okay, now what we have left after leaving only the ones that could posess some intelligence info:
Major Measure, Princess Luna, Princess Celestia, Cadence(through Shining Armor), Sunny Day(highly unlikely, though)
Now, If I remember correctly, Major Measure got relocated recently and I don't know whether to take it as a for or against. Luna is away in Haven, but she can communicate at long distances. Then again, I dunno how would she recieve info there. Celestia is very likely as she seemed to be tracking SK's activities(remember when she summoned him to ask him to stop researching the deaths of the alicorns) and I believe she would have enough power to influence the work of intelligence. Next we have Cadence who would've the info from Shining Armor. However, I think it's unlikely that Shinning would drag his wife into this mess. And while it is theoretically possible for Sunny to have secret info, I highly doubt her involvement in this. Just because y'know, she's Sunny Day.
I'll finish tomorrow, it's 1am
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6227205 White kiełbasa, umarłem
6227276 No wiem, rozjebałem dżekpota. Najlepsze, że było takie przysłowie.
"Od białej kiełbasy wolę białe wiersze"
W sumie to jestem trochę wnerwiony na Anzela, że jego Stary Kontynent (aka. Europa u kucy) to tylko 3 królestwa gryfów.
6227294 Ah but the Gryphon kingdoms don't necessarily HAVE to be Europe and/or "ALL" of Europe. I'm always ambiguous with some details to allow further options. Plus you can't always please everyone with your canon all the time ;)
6227276 Very valid points. Although we're not 100% sure Princess Celestia was watching him or the library in the Crystal Empire. Could be either!
6227219 Brooking can most certainly wait! Every stallion knows that.
6227205 Clever pony ;)
6226905 We'll certainly find out soon enough but that is possible. They did exchange information.
6226756 I really appreciate you saying so. While this tale may be nearing the halfway point there are a lot of SK things I still have planned. I can safely say that this won't be "the end."
I have a feeling it's just a matter of time before someone figures out what Silent Knight is up to and tries to stop him. Tranquil Dusk and Crimson know, but don't understand the big deal. Crystal did notice something was off with Silent Knight, but I don't think she would be able to put 2 + 2 together. The last chapter had the medic pony (Nova? haven't quite remembered her name...) who seems to be the closest to figuring things out.
Silent Knight might need Maya to be a pretty important pony to get him out of trouble...
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Woo!
Though i see you avoided my other point
6227657 That is a pretty valid point. Assuming she'd even get him out of trouble.
6227710 Well, it is a little soon in their relationship ;)
Hey, can you write a side fic about Iridescence and Winterspear? That would be amazing!
6227923 That may happen at some point. I've wanted to explore Winterspear for a while. Azurite is next for a side fiction followed by Sunny. After that though I might circle round to Winterspear.
An epic mix of 'DUN DUN DUUUUUUN!' and 'Ooooooooohcan'twaitforCrystalEmpire!'
And dang! Silent is one smooth mothertrucker when it comes to talking with Crystal!
Woooooo boy!
Well that just spawned a new theory about Maya in my head.
Changeling, maybe?
That last line XD
6227654 I'm a lousy writer, you know that.
And talking things out always leaves that feeling of hunger for a concrete story. I don't want to cause that.
And if you really want it; here is my headcannon: In my opinion the pony europe is called "The Old Continent", and is scattered in a little more than a hundered small states that culturally are split into 9 culturally simlar kingodms, which reasenble the late renessance map of Europe. And there's more: From the south we have the Ottomane Empire which is slowly invading from the south alongside Cartagine. And then the eastern states hve populations split between gryffons and pony. Gryffonia [Russia] is nearly 100% gryffic and the more you go west, the more ponies in the states. In Germane they are practicly unegzistant with 0,25-0,5% of imigrants. Then there are Poneland and Ukraine [why can't I ponfy that name!?] which are two sides of a coin. In Poneland Ponies hold the power, yet most of the populance - 70% - is gryffic, and the Cossacs have it the other way around; most ponies, gryfons hold most of the leading positions. Then there is pony Scandinavia [which name I haven't figured out yet] where central states are 17th century sweden while the seastates are practicly vikings. The Great Britain is the centre of cultural, non-military warfare between 3 sides and Hisprane [I'm bad at names] has issues with culturally autonomic regions. Germane has multiple wars going on between it's states and it's technicly the most advanced, culturally regular and wealthy part of the continent while the internal struggles keep them from becoming too strong. The 2nd coutries left - Prance and whatever-to-call-italy have a cold war with Kartagina and Egipt with the occasional wars on the islands.
And your vision is boooring. Europe's charm is it's varitety of cultures and the way those nations fight for dominace within the continent. And how they all can in one moment unite against a threat. And how you hate your neighbor and ally yourselfes with someone from the other end of the old world.
Awsome chapter also at the rate Christle and silent are going a foal may be around the corner for them ;)
This chapter might be just filler, but sometimes filler has some information in it worth reading about. The buildup is there, slowly but surely the buildup will come to a peak. Oh yes, dis gun be gud. I still am concerned though regarding Maya. I only hope she is on the right side. It would be terrible to find out she is a spy for Alistar, or some double agent.
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She’s got highly classified intel. which only a select few of the highest ranking military officers had access to, and her knowledge and almost instinctual use of spycraft is too good to be a mere soldier, no matter how high‐ranking. Assuming, based purely on that, that Maya is one of the princesses is more than a little premature, especially since we know that Equestria has a spy agency of some sort. Odds are “Maya” is just a high‐ranking spook; it’s not like high‐ranking spooks lack contacts after all.
6229210 That is always the risk I run in trying to convey some important things. I'm not a huge fan of the filter title but every chapter can't be explosions and sex!
6229069 LOL, you know what, you're not wrong in that regard ;) Those things can happen.
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6228236 I might have to check into that. I'm certainly going for the slightly more down to earth feel vs the James Bond super spy. I don't want to use the term realistic but certainly slightly more believable. That is an excellent question regarding the Princess. It depends on again whether she is watching him or just watching things related to the events she sees coming.
6228090 That line has spawned a lot of theorizing for sure. I'd also argue that she just means she can hop a train or send a courier. Of course she may also mean she can speak to him anywhere ;)
6228055 Crystal and I have a theory that he isn't smooth. He just mistakenly says the right thing to her a lot.
6229413 You should read my other comment 6227276
6227654 Answering comments that are in another language; that's some next level dedication to your readers, I like that. Maybe I should start posting in Polish
Well, that chapter was one of those things for sure
I can definitely see where Silent is coming from, being a dragon would be pretty sweet. Well, assuming it doesn't come with some really inconvenient list of species specific disadvantages.
Oh, he'll be doing something all right.
Preach it, Winterspear!
Now that's just unfair.
Dried up old mare love? Silent lives dangerously.
Yeah, that conversation with Silber was suspicious.
Random theory, Maya is Celestia or a direct representative of hers. Turns out trying to kidnap and/or assassinate her little sister really cheesed her off.
So they're working on a plan to secretly ship what's-his-name to Equestria for vengeance? Here's hoping they aren't going to just dump him out of a crate on some foggy dock and murderize him, that's really morally murky.
Stay good, Silent! Think of what all of your loved ones will go through if you get yourself dishonored and killed in search of empty vengeance.
Also, think about what you'd miss out on with Crystal.
On the other hand, maybe Silber was just a random dude who likes swords.
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He was ;) That was my final cameo and his thing was arms and armor. I didn't have a good spot for him so I took the opportunity to make him the waiter that Silent always ended up with.
Great thoughts on the chapter! I do like the idea of just putting him in a crate and tossing him into the sea. That could be fun!
6229656 I take my readers and their comments very seriously! If you're willing to take the time to read and comment I should be willing to take the time and at least acknowledge it. I can't always respond in a perfect way but at least a "you've been heard." I really enjoy that part of this process =D
6229565 Haha I don't normally do it but I'm curious when I see my name surrounded by another language ;D
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My point was that there’s no evidence that “Maya” is a character we know. Besides which, if Celestia or Luna wanted a hit performed there would be no need for the cloak and dagger, they could simply have their head of intelligence draw up a black op.
6229427 You are right. Not all stories have to have those elements in them in order to succeed. Your story is a great example.
The sexual innuendo is strong with this one.
...and then they banged. Again.
I'll be honest wbile I've been catching up I've been so worried that something would come up with either luna or Alistair to cause Silent to have to postpone the trip, then get injured again. When I saw the tittle of this chapter I was like, "aw hell no he is not doing this to me. Anzel don't do this to me!" So I'm so happy nothing has happened... yet, oh plz no.
6244577 I'm glad I'm not totally trusted and that I can still surprise ;D
I don't like how Silent Knight is going through all this to pursue this gryphon. He should just let it go.
I swear if someone references Frozen I will shoot them.
6322961 The cold never bothered me anyway?
I used to read fanfiction just like you. but then I got an arrow to the knee...6322961