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Set after the events of season 4: After realizing that she has feelings for Discord, Fluttershy must figure out if Discord shares the same feelings as her. But her plans goes to waste, when strange blue, cotton candy clouds start to appear.

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Comments ( 71 )

I love this story alot!
I could be your editor if you want.

Oooohhh! I think I might know who the villain is! Loving it!:heart:

5997808 who do you think it is then.

5998231 um...I was thinking maybe.......Eris?...I don't know

This is amazing! Cant belive I didnt see this update sooner. Anyways, this is the best Cant wait for more :twilightsmile:

6011389 thank you and also the update was actually yesterday May 23 not 17 I don't know why it's doing that

KT

let me guess :rainbowhuh: it's Screwball right?

I think it would be funny to have Fluttershy act all precious about Discord lol! Good chapter!

6013713 too bad it would too out of character but I'll give a example-

:flutterrage::Must have my precious Discord!
Discord:calm down Fluttershy.....your scaring me

I didn't watch that much That much lord of the rings

It's would be funny though.

What do you have planned? :duck: :ajsmug:

Ooh! Ooh! Drama! Love it! :heart: *sneezes* Sorry I have this weird summer cold, and it's getting on my nerves, so I'm kinda out of it right now. :pinkiesick:

6015463 I see you have an energetic personality. Glad you liked the story!:twilightsmile:I have lots of things planned still but I'm not spoiling any.:pinkiesmile:

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww!!!!!!!!!! OVERWHELMED WITH CUTENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart:

6017291 seems to me you enjoyed it

Comment posted by Marina Stars deleted May 26th, 2015
Comment posted by GarfieldThePony deleted Nov 29th, 2015

6019415 Great :twilightsmile: and now I jist noticed a couple more things

the mane 6 were tired from their adventure, they had today,

First their should probably be changed to the. There shiuldnt be a comma after adventure and there should probably be a period after toady.

she was stilling getting ready for bed, she was still pushing Discord's statue next to her bed,

Stilling should be still and there should be a period after bed both times.

Ok, now who is causing the chaos?"

You forgot the first quotation mark before Ok.

she disappeared the next day, after that I never seen her since then,

After day there should probably be a period.
You should probably change 'I never seen her since then' to either 'I've never seen her since then.' Or 'I never saw her since then'

Discord apologizing with a bit of red at his checks now

The only error with this is, checks. It should be cheeks.

That is all. Sorry I missed them the first time.
Again love this story alot. Keep it up!

Comment posted by Marina Stars deleted May 26th, 2015

OH HOLY CELESTIA!!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp: YOU KNOW YOU'RE OP WHEN YOU CAN WITHSTAND A PARTY CANNON AT FULL PARTY MODE!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :derpyderp2:

6060117 Great thanks, new chapter tomorrow morning

Awwwww!!!!!!!!! That was cute! Did you write that song or is it from something?

6062861
That's so cool! Well written if you ask me!

6062869 Thanks:pinkiehappy:

The song name is called because I love you.:twilightsmile:

6065853 Everyone wants to burn Angel. :flutterrage:

Somebody call Elmur Fudd.

6062861

Well, time to ramble.

CAN I JUST SAY THAT I LOVE THIS WITH THE SONGS AND ERIS AND FLUTTERCORD AND PARTY CANNONS AND AWESOMNESS AND JUST YES!!!

I'm not saying it doesn't need some work (if you're still looking for an editor or a proofreader, I'm always open), but it's still epic!

:heart: :yay:

6067879 I already have a editor and I'm glad you like the story.:twilightsmile:

oooo who is it?????:rainbowhuh:

6068801 Keep on reading the story and you'll find out.

This is amazing!! I found no errors so yay!

6070871 thanks, did you read all the new chapters?

Which one is now your favorite?

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart: :heart:

Me: Hey! Pinkie Pie!
:pinkiesmile: : Yeah?
:pinkiehappy: : OOH OOH! SODA!!! GIMME THE SODA!!!!!
Me: Mwa ha ha
:pinkiecrazy: : FUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:ajbemused: : You're really evil, ya know that?
:rainbowderp: : Oh no...
Me: I'm not evil, I'm just crazy.
:fluttershysad: : Oh, oh dear...

GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!

6074164 Glad you like the new chapters.:pinkiesmile:

XD

Last chapter is going to be great, no spoilers!

I love the little bits when the princesses talk! It's like lololololololoolololol :trollestia:

So far this chapter is my favorite!!! I died from laughter at the parts with energy drink inguenced pinkies! :rainbowlaugh:
You are awesome

Who's the villain?

Hmm, chapter 8 is called Discord vs Eris... I call chupacabra!

6096204 You are late reading this anyway. So anyone reading after chapter 8 now knows the villain.

can't wait for the sequel

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE FANGIRL DEMANDS A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

6114712 Your gonna have to wait, I still have a Flashlight story and another Fluttercord story I'm working on.

The sequel will mostly likely be in 3 weeks

I DEMAND A SEQUEL NOW!!!!! :flutterrage:.... Um if that's alright with you:twilightblush:
and I sensed a sort of BoD refrence when discord was picking fluttershy up.
Anyways, I think Flutters is going to say 'yes' I not... I WILL DESTROY YOU!

6119266 I am working on a sequel, but also I'm still juggling two other stories.

Hmm, there's a chapter called Discord vs Eris.... I know who it is!!!

Elmo. Definitely Elmo.

6208272 Do you want me to change the name of it? I know since people will already know who it is before reading.

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