Hey, names Midnight, rock star Pegasus, artist and aspiring story writer. Profile pic by me.
Rainbow Dash has had feelings for Twilight for a long time. She was going to tell Twilight how she felt, when an accident landed them both in hospital. Rainbow blames herself, and has never left Twilight's side since.
Loss is a painful thing.
Looking for and editor, let me know via PM if you wanna edit for me.
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Very little grammatical revisions need to be made.
I'm not one for sad fics, but this one was a good one.
Ugh that hit me right in the feels
I think this could be worth more than one chapter but overall it was really good
'Tries not to cry... Cries a lot...'
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I disagree.
The entire story has many many errors. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, lack of quotation marks etc.
This story was rushed. No story line, no build up. Basically a mess.
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Sorry Midnightblaze but this could've been done a lot better.
I'd put this as tragedy. Very good story. I think all mistakes I noticed have already been mentioned.
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I just cracked myself up! Feel free to let me know of any more...uh, errors, I have edited the ones I can see at the moment.
gah i hate twilight killers why do so many feel the need to kill twilight in their stories ill never really understand it
Now putting that hate aside it was ..... decent
5954001 I do it for feels. No idea why it's always Twilight though, I did it because Twilight would've filled the role better in my opinion.
5954001 >:) Is why, I suppose.
You want a living Twilight?
Bam. There. 
Erm... Rushed.
Well that hit me right in the feels
(wonder how many people said that already).Great story, it was short but sometimes short is good.Also, I have been listening to Gorillaz lately and this story reminded me of their song "Broken"
lol probably just me trying to connect any story with a song.
Feels like someone stabbed me in the chest. I tried not to cry, but a droplet appeared in my eye.
Where'd the tragedy tag go? I need something to warn me next time...
Let me guess…
Testing, Testing, 1, 2, 3 but Twilight DOES get hit. A twist!