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Mathew_The_Raridash_Fan


I love My Little Pony and Littlest Pet Shop. My favorite ponies are Rarity and Rainbow Dash. I love to write fanfiction, but I need to learn to pace better.

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Pinkie Pie asked Rarity to make her a dress so that she could impress a special somepony for a dance. Rarity makes her the dress and tries to search for clues to find out who the special pony is.

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First comment yay. I quite enjoyed the story. Short and sweet. Could even get a sequel.

I dont usually say this, but the pacing seemed… off. It went way too fast for my taste. Some detail could have gone a long way in… well, pretty much all of it. Other than that… it was okay. Five of ten.

Because of this story, this story right here, I'm going to join the Raripie group, NICE WORK!

~ADG

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