Princess Twilight Sparkle is having a great life; she has a loving family, amazing friends, and her own castle. But all that is not meant to last; she discovers that five years into the future (much to both her and her friends' shock and horror) she will become the Number One Enemy of Equestria and a ruthless mass murderer. Her future self, known as Dark Spark, has stuck Twilight in the dystopian Equestria and has gone back in time to create the events that will lead Twilight to becoming evil. Now the princess must fight her way back and defeat Dark Spark before it's too late.
This is loosely based on the Danny Phantom episode The Ultimate Enemy, but there are massive differences. This is my first fanfic for MLP, so constructive criticism will be appreciated. Thanks to ChingKittyCat for designing the cover photo! :)
Looks somewhat promising.... tracking. No favorite yet. You must prove that this is different from that episode for that to happen.
Since I need to practice my horse anatomy, I'm going to redraw your story cover for you. For free, of course.
You sure did upload this at the right time.
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Really? Wow, thanks!
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I'll also be adjusting the colors to as they are put in the story. As well as some other things to make the design look acceptable. Hopefully that's fine by you.
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Thanks again! I'm not the best drawer, so I'm really grateful for this.
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I'll be a bit. If anything, this helps me more than you. I need to expand my drawing resume when it comes to my realistic style.
You're welcome, though.
Things like this I like, keep it up.
http://sta.sh/01up4rs3etcr
It's done. I got rid of those horns because they were annoying to look at. Didn't look good. Same with the bracelets. Tell me if you want anything changed and I'll try to change it.
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Alright, Thanks for your help! Looking back, I agree with you on cutting the horns out of the character.
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No problem. Hope it looks good. I think it looks a lot more professional.
Huh.
I don't remember much of Danny Phantom, but I do remember this episode, especially that Ghostly Wail.
With a little polish, this could become quite the interesting story.
I will keep watch on this.
When is Chapter 4
Um... Hello??
We would like it if you made the chapters quicker. Its been years now.