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Marine Delight


Hi! I'm Marine Delight, and I've decided to start writing fan fictions about some of these fun-looking ponies around the site, including myself. WARNING: There will be clop and vore ahead. Also orcas.

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>vore
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>NON-FATAL
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Loved it. I wanted to make my own story around it but this one is better.

6115374 I have to say, when he swallowed her I got worried. But in the end, loved it

6115510 I'm glad you did. I honestly never thought I'd get this much attention on the first day of submission.

Hmm, considering how happy one of the Spa Twins was to get Zecora's help with their baths, I dare say they might be just as receptive to Spike's help.

Though in a less innocent way.

I was hoping a fic would be made based off that drawing.
And this was a very good read.
A little awkward at times, but that's vore for ya.
I hope you write more soon!

6116059 Awkward? Could you please explain so I'll know how to better myself?

6116082
By that, I mean how Spike just let Rarity climb in his mouth that fast.
Not saying that that's a bad thing, mind you, but I'd expect him to be a lot more reluctant on that.
But I know fics like this kinda need a break in character for it to work.
And, again, that's not a bad thing.
Even in my vore fics I had to have them break a bit of character, but that's all part of the story.
This was still an amazing read, and I really hope you do more.

Interesting story.
*Sees it's Sparity*
WHY CAN'T I UPVOTE MORE THAN ONCE?!

6114917
You cold man. Take some cough medicine, sleep early with the heater on, drink plenty of fluids, and get plenty of rest. Mmkay?

Loved it, is there any more like this?:scootangel:

Not a big fan of vore... But this made me rock hard!

6116743 With time, perhaps there will be. :raritystarry:
6116765 I'm glad you liked it, anyway. :twilightsheepish:

I am not really into vore, but this was actually pretty good.

6117563 Thanks. I was hoping I wouldn't alienate other readers from this. I'm glad I didn't. :pinkiehappy:

6116368 Ah. That's understandable. But I'd like to imagine that's just Spike being submissive to whatever Rarity asks of him. That's kind of how he was in "Inspiration Manifestation" before he decided things were getting too crazy for their own good.

I was afraid to read it, but I gave it a chance. I don't like vore, but this wasn't badly written. Have a like.

6118703 sequel! !!!!!!!!!!!!

In your own words.
More! More! More!

Phew. Shit man. I usually find myself very bored and uninterested with non-fatal, but you, my friend, made this a very, very sensual experience. I think you did a fantastic job with them reflecting what was going on against their preconceptions of their predator and prey roles. I think you could have gone with a little more doubt and caution from Spike to have more chances at fleshing out just how much Rarity trusts him but you did well with it.

>anthro
Eh, it wasn't too obtrusive. I enjoyed

6344300 Thanks. I just wanted to match the setting with the drawing this was based on. :twilightsheepish: Glad you liked it, though. :twilightsmile:

6344915
I mean, you picked the most horrifying type of anthro when you could totally have just left them as normal equines and it would have changed NOTHING but yeah it was enjoyable whyareallthegoodstoriesalwayshorrifyinglyanthro

I actually have a phobia of cannablism and eating things that are still alive, But I found this fic to be quite pleasant

6345492 No worries. It felt irksome to me, too. The necessary changes have been made.

7020510 Thank you so much for enjoying it! I am so glad so many people love this story, even those who are turned away by such a subject matter. :pinkiehappy:

Does anyone know how to find the image?

7427960 I can't link the source since it's NSFW, but the artist's name is in the description.

This shit right here. This is the good shit.

We need more stories that are happy and tender like this.

Soft vore is hard to do.

11014642
How is it hard, exactly?

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