At a Cutie Mark Crusader meeting, Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom are exhausted from helping their bigger sisters, but when they get into an argument about which sister makes them work harder, they switch for a day.
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I wonder if when Rarity undid AB's bow, her mane unraveled and completely covered her head and face, like Cousin It.
This was a fun story, especially with Rarity and AJ having the same exact argument.
Also, the Block paragraph format looks good here, and if it makes things easier on eReaders, I'd say to continue with it.
Sweet, silly fun story
Feels a tad rushed overall. But it gives a good idea of what's going on, and how hard it is to break from what you're familiar with. I like it.
Shouldn't that be 'roll call?'
I seem to hear that a lot. When a guy gets involved in something like this, he'll keep going because he can't admit that he lost, but when a girl gets involved in something like this, she'll keep going because she can't admit that the other person won. I don't know why, but I just find the differences in phraseology fascinating.
6123197 Huh, so it is. To be frank I simply assumed "row call" since it makes more logical sense as a phrase. I've never actually used the phrase before now. My bad.
6121776 To be honest, it is a little rushed. I don't want to say "I didn't try", but it'd be more accurate to say I gave this story cursory attention rather than focus everything onto it.
6123318 I've just always seen it in print as 'roll call,' so no problems. Cute story. Have yourself a like.