insect?

I think you mean incest

6133748 Thanks, unfortunately this page wasn't part of the stuff I proofread a hundred times.

For a first story, that was pretty damn good. A few spelling and grammar mistakes, true, but nothing too jarring.

Also HAWT.

This was f*cking G-R-E-A-T. Spectacularly hot. Thank you.

Very nice, only mistake I noticed was "loved crazed sister", otherwise excelent work.

Incomplete?

6134328 I had plans to write another chapter for now if it turned out people liked this thing. Sunset may or may not be getting more involved.

6134817 I only put this story in the clopfics and humanized ponies group. Someone else must've added it to the others, and I doesn't seem like there's anything I can do about it.

6134295 I don't understand what's wrong with that line.

6134826 should be "love-crazed sister"

EqG Princest? We don't see too much of this and I thank you for this wonderful addition.

However while this may be due to my personal preference, the mentions of all of them happen to have D-cups and Celly's 9 inch dick just come off as too unrealistic for me but it is kinda hot. Unrealistic but hot. Make of that what you will I guess.

Since this is marked incomplete, I hope to see more of this from you.

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Can we please get a bonus chapter where Sunset blackmails Celestia into giving her the fucking of a lifetime? Please?

This was fun.

AWESOME!!! I love it. I wait for the next chapter.

Enjoyable, sexuality is very healty and really make you happier and glowing, no wonder why Luna no longer mind being the victim of Sunset and able even get her aback and tease her too.

Masturbation is also inevitable, if you DON'T do it, you are not human.

All I could imagine during the part when sunset was looking through the closet waspbs.twimg.com/media/BcxjqmOCUAA-cY1.jpg

6152272 Your comment made me laugh out loud compulsively for the first time in years.