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A Hoof-ful of Dust


You can't see the forest...

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Pinkie has drawn up plans for Applejack and Rarity's wedding. They're not even dating. So they say.

Written for the Writer's Training Grounds '15 #8.

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Comments ( 12 )

Good story, nice rationale, wonderful twist ending.

Though part of me does wonder how much of it's Pinky predicting the future, how much is self-fulfilling prophecy.

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Applejack and Rarity are being preposterous. So what if opposites don't attract? Pinkie Pie knows all. ALL. DO NOT QUESTION HER.

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And how much is just Batmare-style contingency plans.

Burned by fluttershutter, ouch.

Very nice. Glad I saw this in my notifications.

Quesadillas are a burden of the heaviest sort. Only the worthy may enjoy their cheesy wonder and you are not worthy Twilight

Ah you can smell the meta in this one. Nicely done! I found myself laughing along.

"It's, um," Fluttershy mumbled, "sometimes it's that nopony hears me..."

:rainbowlaugh: Yeah, it's easy to be seen as tactful when your blurted-out comments are barely more audible than your internal monologue.

In any case, an entertaining takedown of a romance trope, with some fun in the Pinkiecave and a bit of actual shipping for body. It was a fun read.

I have written a review of this story. It can be found here.

Okay, this was already great when discussing the Rarijack, but the Twishy made it even better. Excellent work!

Hahaha, loved the comedy and humor and that epic plot twist! So awesome! I just absolutely adore this fic! :raritywink:

Very sweet and cute, the ending was a very nicely done twist on things.

This needs a sequel lol xD

Oh come on, the seed has been planted!!! Plus it kinda seemed like there may also be some Pinkiedash in there ;)

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