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HEARTBREAKING. Why must you do this to me?!
6284032 I know. Same here.
6284032 It's always easier to write from personal experience.
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6284159 #JoinTheClub
I think that what people is waiting is to understand something. Your storytelling is not bad. I like the way you describe the feelings and how the character live them. From a story like your story, I want to read the evolution of the whole. I think it will be better if there were more descriptions on how their friendship become weaker. However, I liked it. ^^
,Peace from Midnight.
6289373 Hmmmm.... You're right, it probably would have been better if I had done that. Oh well, I can't say that I was exactly happy with how this story turned out, but I really didn't know what else to add. I always think of stuff after I post the story or people comment with ideas on how it could have been better and then I think to myself, 'Yeah, I could have done better if I had thought of something like that.' As long as my next story is better, then I guess I'm doing something right. Thanks for liking, by the way.
6290051 I like how you think.
Well say! I will read your next stories.
A crush wasn't involved, but this otherwise matches the load of ended friendships I went through especially after going to a different middle school than the rest of my friends many years ago. Good job w