Following Cranky and Matilda's wedding, Cadence tries to understand why Shining Armor cried so hard.
*Special thanks to Word Worthy for editing.
*Written at Equestria LA 2015 in Anaheim, CA
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Therapy for the win.
I'm never going back!
The past is in the past!
Let it go! Let it go!
Short, but cute. Thumbs up.
It's rather clear cut and the dialogue seems kinda wooden.
It just feels like it resolves too fast and that shining is being blamed for trauma affecting his ability to cope.
Idk, the idea is interesting but it didn't work for me.
Short and nice. But the idea had greater potential. But it was good anyway.
6405155 How do you want the idea to achieve greater potential?
6440158 See what the guy before me said.
6440161 Hmm, hopefully I'll find an editor at some point. Do you know of any in particular?
6440177 Well, Word Worthy is a nice guy. And don't misunderstand me when I criticized your story, I gave it thumbs up, I didn't hate it
6440187 Oh no, I didn't misunderstand you at all. I'll shoot him a PM, thanks.
6440193 No prob
6440196 All right, he's edited the story for me. Let me know what you think.
6440484 Yeah, it's good. Well done. But I have a question: Who are Lock Down and General Kuwaga? Lock Down is not from Transformers, right?
6443572 They are two characters from my story Defender of Equestria and its unfinished sequel Trial of a Changeling.
6443587 Oh, okay. Sure the story would've had a Crossover tag if Lock Down was the same one from Transformers
6397585 Pretty much what I was about to say.
Interesting.
He's just jealous that his wedding couldn't have been perfect
Oh PTSD
Ok then
9887939
i figure is his guilt over what he did to twilight at the rehersal