I am here. Right behind you when you're not looking. In your dreams when you can't help it. In your thoughts when you finally notice. Always watching. Always stalking. Bringing fear to your heart. Making it spread through your existence. Until fear is all you are. Then you're ready. Then you're mine.
A story about a brony somehow ending up in Equestria... In the Everfree Forest... As Slender Pony.
Rated Teen for Gore.
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Not a fan of Slendman or Slenderpony in this case but i giave it a try and liked it
it goes directly in my tracking and here a thumbs up
Edit:don't know why but i can't click on the thumb up.Meh i'll try another time
6333143 Thank you so much. It's a pleasure to hear you liked my story... especially while not being a fan of Slenderman stories.
Slender man/Slender pony is real. Slender man is on the 1 dollar bill look it up.
Slenderpone, you say?
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6333623 Exactly. Nice art!
I'm honored to have you commenting on my story. Thank you.
6334948 Me? Why me of all people?
6334962 You're the author of "My Little Luna" and it's sequel... and I love those stories! I love how you've written them. They had inspired me to start my "My Little Nightmare" story.
6334979 Thank you. Really. I'm smiling harder than Pinkie
I find it humbling and awe inspiring that my work can inspire someone like yourself to get your own stories off the ground.
Keep going, dude. I started out like you did and now look where I am. If you work hard and come up with good ideas, then the sky is the limit for where writing can take you.
6335044 Oh, I'm not exactly looking to get super popular. I'm so busy lately that inspiration rarely hits me. However, when it does... I don't hesitate to write and post.
Interesting
the style of confusing me at first since it's not like other stories I've read but I do like it
the atmosphere is amazing
I must ask for more
6335296 Thank you so much. Indeed, style of writing may seem dull at first, but at the same time, it's perfect for such an emotionless character.
6335311
the style's not dull it's weird
after like reading 60+ stories with very similar styles seeing one that's different is weird
it's not like I don't like it it just caught me off guard
6335332 I'm trully glad to see you liked my story
I like this story. Keep making more stories bro!
6337029 Thank you so much. It's such a pleasure to hear.
This is an amazing fic. It is amazingly well written, and atmospheric.
God we need more fics of this quality on fimfic. Keep on writing please ^^
6339968 Oh my... I can't believe someone love this story of mine so much. Thank you for your kind words.
yay! hopefully this slender mane story wont either be cancelled or go on hiatus like most others.
more please!
6342586 Thank you so much for your kind words. It's a pleasure to see my story is enjoyed by the others.
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Luna is sad that the last update was over a month ago.
fix. now.
please?
You have caught my attention...
Please continue the story, and do not do what so many others have failed to do.
Good chapter
Error here and there but whatever.
hmmm
i could always
Monster
Straight or Right (?)
Scroll
i hope it helped you a little
See you all on the next update
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But thank you for your corrections regardless. That saves my time. And I'm glad you've enjoyed the chapter.
Great chapter my good my man, can't wait to see the next chapter.
P.S. hope it comes out soon
6577275 The hopes full of bright light and happiness give birth to the fear of them never coming true. The fear grows slowly, but someday... it turns into the nightmares. The nightmares consume their victim, weakening them, feeding on their fear and distress. And when the mental health of a victim is no more...
It is time for a dessert.
6577330
Ummm...
What?
6577386 Nothing. Have a nice dream tonight.
6577440
Well then...
You are one creepy son if a bitch.
6577459 You think being rude will make your dream brighter tonight? Now I sure hope not. I've decided to please my reader by writing a reply which would perfectly match the spirit of the story, and that is what I get?! I'm done here.
6577472
No, your just being really creepy.
6577497
6577502
Oh, that makes more sense,
Now I feel like a jerk.
The correct word is shrieks.
Yesss, more chapters, MORE! I demand it!
6577556 You can't demand the inevitable.
Good story so far ;)
6579532 Thank you kindly. It is a pleasure to see the others enjoying my work.
6579539 Np ^^
:3 another chapter
6579572 Yes. Yes, it is. A terror the like of which those ponies have never experienced before? Yes. Yes, there is.
i really like the way this is written it is unique and has a very nice appeal to it very good :D
6579580 Thank you so much for your kind words. It is a pleasure for me to be able to surprise even those readers who have a lot of experience here on FimFiction.
ABORT!
6579604 There are much nicer ways of saying there is a spelling mistake in one word.
Yes.
Another Slender-pony story, shall I dare read in hopes of this being a good read or shall I be disappointed by this mediocre story. Or is this story worth reading...
I shall be the judge of that since I know what true horror is...
6579637 You're most welcome to read and judge. I wouldn't expect anything special though.
This is the most well written Slender/MLP fiction i've ever read. Continue good sir!
6579652 Thank you. It is an honor for me to witness such a reaction.
one spelling error that i keep seeing is you spelling twillight.
her name has one "L" not two
6579770 Ah, I see. I can even guess the reason why I've learnt it incorrectly. There is an i on each side of l, which creates an illusion of i's and l's being confused with one another.