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Upvoted just for futa on male, really need more of that out here, lol.
I could see rarity as a Drag Queen.
While I agree with yoshi that we need more futa on male, and I thank you for adding to that, I cannot help but feel that the sex itself was lacking in length and feeling. I do agree with Flash being at the very least bi-curious the quickness of him saying yes was a little off putting. Also the sex itself was too short and did not properly convay his feelings during the act.
it was a good read honestly, just a bit bugged by the fact it ended before I could...
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Were you even reading the same story? The whole thing was nothing but Flash's feelings during the act. He's got a lot going on in his head while he's taking his first cock.
If you're talking about wanting to read more about the actual mechanical act of sex, I suggest going to watch some porn instead.
It features boring Sentry...so that is a dealbreaker for me.
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I wish to apologize for the negativity of my review. It was late and I was falling asleep when I typed it up. I only ment to point out that there was very little physical descriptions of of is occurring from flash's pov. And that is a matter of my personal taste and had nothing with how your writing itself was. It was a great read for a clopfic if just a little on the short side when it came to the actual sex which is again a matter of personal opinion from me. Objectively this is leagues above anything I could write and I commend you on it. Especially if this was a spur of the moment idea.
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It's cool.
I just find that too many clopfics (or any sort of amateur erotica on the internet) focus far too heavily on the mechanical aspects and none at all on the emotions. I figured the people reading this already have a notion of what the actions I was describing actually feel like (as opposed to say a F/F fic) and I wouldn't really need to describe it for them, but perhaps I overcompensated, especially when it came to Flash receiving.
Who knows, maybe I'll write a sequel threesome with Twi or someone sometime and give it another go.
6359969 Seriously?
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Some people are just very narrow minded.
Personally, I'm not that big a fan of Flash either, but he's a pretty dude, which makes him great for unexpectedly confronting girlcocks.
>>MLPFan234 I'm not fan of the character. Is that a problem? LOL I got 2 likes and dislikes for it. So I must have piss off a couple of peeps.
>>Twi-Fi Network I'm not narrow minded. I just don't like Flash Sentry.
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So why would you even click on this story or comment? You're wasting your time that could be spent doing something you like instead of whining about something you don't like. In fact, I'll make it easier for you, since you seem to need the motivation.
What is the fetish?
6370554 You respond to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment that you want to respond to and then clicking on the >> that appears.
Rarity's behavior here is kind of obnoxious; she really should've let Flash know what he was getting into. (Not to mention she outright says she's resorted to blackmail in the past. Since when is Rarity this awful?)
Other than that, not gonna lie, this was hot.
Well, this was pretty hot. And I want more.
This was going great, right up until you gave Rarity a dick. GROSS
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Yeah I agree. I did not see Rarity with a penis coming. For me it’s no problem to see a women with a strap on, but with a real one? It just doesn’t feel or look right.