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While spring cleaning wither her animals, a visitor stops by Fluttershy's door. A terrifying visitor. Will Fluttershy be brave enough and kind enough to handle Garble the teenage dragon?
Story Idea by Dr.Wolf (with his permission)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d59b2JI9iUA&index=10&list=PL4flTJfGvAgddMRJqF3fBSeb_Py4MVB0h
Cover Art by Rox Dragon on Deviantart
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ahhhhhhhhHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! FANGIRL ACTIVATE!!!!!!!! Sorry,
I've been wanting a story like this, so thanks! I'm loving it so far!
I looking forward for the next chapter.
It started realy intresting.
I'm going to enjoy this.
So the visitor is doing the spring cleaning? Nice synopsis.
Other than that, not much of a story here. More like a prologue to an actual story, so can't say anything about it really. Some nice vocabulary use here and there, but there were also a lot of grammar boo-boos, so... eh. I won't vote either way on this.
Yes! A new chapter!
I can't wait for discord to react to this
Love it.
You just got a new reader! :D
Interesting... I await further greatness.
Good chapter :)
Discord is about to get in the game!!! :D
Please continue :)
I can't wait for more
How much longer till the next chapter? Been waiting for months. Please post soon!
Will the next chapter be out in January? Oh, I want to see what happens and I can almost hardly stand it.
Huzzah! I loved the ending! Thank you for finally finishing this great story.
Awesome. I love it.
That was a great story, loved the ending! I thought that it would be a bit longer but it was great anyway.
This was so beautiful.
The Element of Kindness everypony
Whoa, that's quite a way to begin.
Ha Charlotte's Web I love that movie 😊
Oh no its garble figured he'll be here causing trouble
Wow this looks like a pretty interesting start for your story apparently this dragon name garble stumbled around the everfree forest in a rainy day and he forcefully barge in Fluttershy's Cottage and all the animals ran away except for the three animals they tried their best to defend her but they all got beaten down and I had to admit angel you're pretty brave but it wasn't enough so Fluttershy beg garble to hurt them and it looks like she is stuck with him
Okay I probably will treat this as an alternate universe story because later the episode I'm sure smolder will be very disappointed at him if he finds out what he did but anyway it looks like garble is making demands now working poor Fluttershy an angel he bravely went to get help from the others and again I'm surprised that angel helped out a lot which it makes sense because he cared about Fluttershy but once he made it to the castle he fainted but Twilight got home hopefully he will wake up soon and warn them about Fluttershy
Well it looks like things are turning pretty well so far at least for Fluttershy so anyway Fluttershy made the fish for garble but he was going after the Chipmunks and it really got her mad that he promised he won't hurt any of the animals so he backed off for now and ate the fish as Fluttershy is attending to the bear and the goat who got hurt from garble he was confused why is she is doing and why is she being so kind to the animals it's just Fluttershy always have that magic touch she is the element of kindness and speaking of that Fluttershy notice garble injury and he looks like he got in a fight with other creatures who is bigger than him so she wanted to help him to get better but of course he is so dang stubborn but she promised she won't tell anybody and well help him to recover and with that he would let her do it now again she has a Magic Touch hopefully this would help him realize what he did was wrong
It looks like Twilight call out for her friends to come to the castle for emergency they know that Fluttershy is in trouble but they need to know what they had to deal with so they ass Angel what kind of creature is causing the trouble they didn't give him the name because he doesn't know but they know it's a dragon with enough information they all raced to Fluttershy but Discord showed up and of course he jokes around but until the others explain about Fluttershy's in trouble Discord it has odd change of reaction talk the main V and teleport himself and the others to the cottage well this is going to very interesting
Aww this was pretty sweet and kind of sad at the same time so after Fluttershy was done cleaning up the wounds on garble she decided if he wants to stay here until he heals but then Discord showed up and basically ready to mess with garble after what he did to Fluttershy but she stopped him before he do any harm on garble then suddenly the other showed up they were glad to see she was okay but a little upset with garble despite everything she still offers her friendship to him but he couldn't because he thought that dragons cannot do friendship but when he looked at Fluttershy all he see his kindness the truth and warm from her side but he couldn't take it and he just ran off when he look back he still remembers the kind Pony Fluttershy is and how much she really said that to him and with that he disappeared into the forest probably heading for the dragonlands someday he will learn and he might change his mind this is a pretty good story I really enjoy this keep up the good work