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I cringed a little at this to be honest.
6421397 Well, that's not a good sign. What made you cringe?
6421478 Actually in this case Cringe is good..... this shit kinda turned me on to.... hate to ask but think you could've done one for Rainbow and Gilda that's like this?
6421480 Well, if I decide to continue with this, there will be stories like this for all the mane 6. They'll be straight ships though.
However, if this catches on, I might write a one shot about Rainbow Dash and Gilda.
6421489 Aw. You're no fun.
Like the concept, can't do this pairing
I actually like this lol. Pretty please continue.
Interesting premise.
Hmm. Maybe Blueblood's treatment of Rarity was actually a subconscious slip-up showing his deeply buried kinks. He found himself attracted to her, so he began humiliating her without really meaning to.
this is one of the better clop fics I've seen on this site.
I'd love to see more of this story.
6423457 You sir/madam, have made my day.
I can't help but notice some mistakes.
*fingering
You may also consider restructuring that sentence a bit.
I'll read this. But, for now I'm going to sleep.
6421397 Found you again, Dashie. We must have some kind of similar tastes?
6426025 Perhaps.
I liked it, but that cliff hanger... Not fair
I honestly think Blueblood should have more fanfics portraying him like this (kind and sweet) but he was nervous with rarity
6434969 My thoughts exactly. I rarely ever make Blueblood a truly bad person. Most of the time I use this portrayal of him in my works when I do use him.
6434972 so far im really liking the story and i cant wait for the next chapter
Perhaps, not your best choice of words.
Seeing as you have 30 upvote to 19 downvotes, most of which are probably people who downvoted due to the fetishes involved without reading, or are haters, you're good.
You may want to fix that, Christ doesn't exist here. Though I did see one fic somewhere I think where there was a pony by that name that was a distant relative of Celestia's.
Correct.
So this is after Canterlot Boutique...
Oh I do like this. Personally, I do see Blueblood as a bit of an ass, but on the night of the Gala, he'd had a particularly bad day, and he thought Rarity was just some gold digger who he wanted to get rid of, not realizing who she was until it was too late, but this works just as well.
Fingers crossed for chloroform
Best Aunt ever.
And you know what? Fuck those 20 downvotes, mostly probably just haters who downvoted it because it was a clopfic with BDSM, I liked it. This was a very good sex scene and if you keep this up, I can see this becoming quite popular. I can't wait to see how Rarity will react to Noble Heart being Blueblood. But, I can wait.
6580577 You really think this can become popular?
Hmm... alright then. I'll make that happen. I don't care about the downvotes or the lack of comments anymore. I'm going to keep going with this story and make it the best I can make it.
Thanks. I needed this.
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No problem, Libra! As Harold Ziddler would say,
Hit my fetish right dead on the head there mate. Great job Wonderful story.
6583318 Glad you enjoyed it. The fun won't stop there
6583677 update?
6762315 Life and other works are getting in the way. I have the next chapter, but I'm not sure I'm proud of it enough to post it.
Man I was so excited when I saw this had updated, and it was worth the wait! Thank you for sharing this side of yourself with us (because you're really good at it), and take your time, we will wait.
Worry not, you'll always have me. Wait that sounded wrong.
One word.
Oh this is gonna be like this for a while.
Yeah, she's kindof a living lie detector.
If only you knew. Besides, he wasn't exactly a stranger. What makes me curious is why Rarity didn't pick up who Noble Hearts was, mask or not, voices tend to be distinctive. Then again maybe he changed it with a potion or something, I dunno.
Hey, Sexy Librarian's a look and Twilight pulls it off with aplomb.
You really referenced THAT book? *sigh* I shouldn't be surprised. Also, kinda pity Rarity for having read it. On the bright side, it's easy to take potshots at it.
Will you not? It's kinda rude? Also, Rarity, magic, you have it, use it.
That's, kinda the idea.
Thank you.
Griffinstone. One word.
You're good friends. That, and pissing off someone capable at moving at over Mach 1 at least, happens to be an athlete and someone who fought toe to toe with Tirek only boosted by the magic of the other three princessess while he had his own, Discord's and that of all Equestria, not that smart a move.
Wow, you've done your research.
If he did, that's kinda undermine the POINT of a safe word/signal.
Up to you.
I appreciate this little scene, Rarity's not hiding anything from Spike, and Spike's not flying off the handle.
This is nice. Speaking of which, I don't think you ever mentioned Spike in Code Lyoko: EG. Is he Twilight's dog or something?
Eh, that's negotiable.
Poor guy.
In a sense but, relationships like that, and relationships in general depend a LOT on trust.
Then the moment your friends find out well, he's not only incur the wrath of the Elements of Harmony, or Rainbow Powers Bearers, I guess, but also of a Princess, a young drake who can BREATHE FIRE and if Dragon Quest is to be believed, can belly flop into lava with no ill effects. AND Celestia and Luna to boot. He's screwed if he does.
No turning back now.
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That and the line about him nearing 18 years makes me hope he'll find his own partner.
I always thought Sweetie Belle or Scootaloo could maybe work...
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It's usually either Rarity, Applejack, Twilight or one of the CMC he's shipped with I find.
6439667 Spike is set to appear in Code Lyoko EG, possibly in the next chapter. If not there then the chapter after it.
6877679 And yes, I HAD to reference that book. One of the reasons I'm doing this story is as a response to that book and how it's a HORRIBLE representation of the lifestyle.
I'd like to think I know a bit about the lifestyle personally.
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(You should have seen that coming.)
6878169 And you learned the reason I'm so nervous. They say write what you know, and well...
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I'm not judging you, I was making a joke, reference humor's kinda my shtick. I've got a folder that's got 70 video clips for these exact situations. Yes I get bored very easily. However this story does not bore.
It would be cool if Sapphire Shores came back as a background pony. Also, I miss that sass o' hers.
She's an immortal alicorn who's going to outlive virtually everyone short of Celestia, Cadence and possibly Twilight. Whatever she damn well pleases provided it's legal.
It's the little touches.
Then no. Also, she's over 1000 years old, you pick up a few tricks here and there when you're so old.
Yet.
Don't tell me you're getting cold feet.
She's right.
I can imagine.
If you only knew.
I think not.
You'll probably find out soon enough.
It really is the little thing that make this go from good to great.
You do. You just don't know that you do.
Fair enough, no permanent marks.
Worse reasons to have exist.
You realize that's open to HEAVY interpretation.
Yeah, you do have a sister to take care of.
It really is the little details.
You signed Ursula's scroll, Ariel. You gotta accept the consequences.
Besides, you wanted this.
I have the sneaking suspicion that that, is what he means.
There really isn't.
Considering how Sweetie Belle managed to burn JUICE and her Mother and Father are able to eat that cooking, I suspect that's probably for the best.
Think of your position. Think of his. Think of what that implies. Now, take a guess. Take a wild fucking guess, throw a rock, and I'll guarantee you, you'll get it right.
Again, the little touches, the subtle reminders that this is perfectly consensual for both parties and there is an established safe word (Which for whatever reason is always red, go figure.) and it can be used. Wonder what gesture they'll use for if she's gagged at some point?
What is it with characters and repeating shocking revelations?
Can you imagine how that must feel for a unicorn? Having one of the things that makes you, you, gone.
Only thing is, you can kick ass if pressed, and this is relatively safe and your idea to boot.
Is that even a real thing?
Not quite.
Yes.
In all fairness, it was her idea.
Implications implications
Trust her, it was her idea, you have to trust her, she obviously trusts you.
She is?
GenErosity.
Aw, shucks, you're making me blush...
Are Noble Heart and Blueblood the same guy?
7230244 Yes, they are. Noble Heart is the disguise and identity Blueblood uses in order to be close to Rarity, since he's afraid that she'll still hate him for how he treated her at the Gala.
SV? Are you still there? I would love for you to continue this story.
7548256 I'm here. I'd love to continue it, but this is hard for me to write. It's a bit personal, this story, as it's me letting out a part of myself I don't show, and it's my first ever erotic fiction (refuses to use the word "clop").
7548293 I know this is hard for you but I would do anything to get just one more chapter. So please try I love this story so much.
Agreement with bellac27. Things are getting really juicy.
I think it's very important how you stress the terms of their agreement. It is good that Blueblood and Rarity are having second thoughts; it shows their humanity and decency.
This is probably the only fic I've read so far that actually pulls out all the stops as far as the rules of SSC are concerned. Good work!
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This story has been in my read later list for a while. I finally get the time to read it and I just finished the last chapter. Not only is this story incomplete, but it hasn't been updated in 17 months!?
This story is so amazing. I can't think of the last time I read a story with this 'subject matter' that was this good. For starters, what you have going on here is a personal fetish of mine that I can't really share with other people. And Rarity is my absolute favorite. So to see Rarity in this kind of situation is too much to put into words. And what you've done with Blueblood is so unique, I'm really into this side of him. And I can't help but have the nagging suspicion that Luna has been behind those dreams the whole time.
I really love this story, and where it leaves off feels like it's only the beginning. I really want there to be more, but it has gone so long without an update I don't know if there will ever be more. I understand you said this story lets you get out a personal side of yourself that you don't share with others. I feel the same way when I read stories like this. It helps me to know that there are others that feel the same way.
This really is a great story. You now have one more like on this fic, and another fan tracking it who can't wait for more. However long that wait may be. /)
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Oh there will DEFINITELY be more, as I have the next chapter in slow production, but it's sort of on the back burner at the moment because other projects. But I am very happy that you enjoy this story, and it's nice to find other people into the lifestyle.
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That's so great to hear. I really look forward to what you have planned for this story.