When Rarity finds out her shower no longer works,
and that the spa is down for maintenance,
she goes out to get clean elsewhere.
It doesn't go well...
Author's Shower SHOWER SHOWER!: Title and concept based off one of my favorite episodes of my favorite show.
I'm...uh, pretty sure you can guess which show I'm talking about...
Also, this takes place before Twilight's tree house was blown to pieces...too soon?
I should of taken a bubble bath with Spikey
Bubble bath? I only take regular baths
Spike farts in the bath tub and whizzes in the shower
instant hot water!
cold bubbles or hot showers!
Doomie you can come up now
Is it based off of that ed edd and eddy episode where Double D tries to get a shower but it seems the entire UNIVERSE is against him?
6912389 Most likely, it even makes a direct reference to the place the Ed's live.
Poor Rarity.
6912607 That episode was soo fucking cruel! XD You couldnt help but feel sorry for poor Double D.
Whats your opinion on the later seasons? (5,6 and the specials?)
Idk why people seem to dislike them, I love them. They are different but thats hardly a reason to dislike it (Its like hating all seasons after 3 because Twilight got wings, its just a change but its the same, you know?)
6913144 Honestly I never watched them. So I wouldn't know.
6913144 as far as "the universe is against you" episodes go, that was on of the funnier ones. definitely better than the cursed telephone episode
The picture kinda reminds me when I had a really bad day...
6913266 "Sorry, Wrong Ed" is one of the worst episodes, it just felt unfair to Eddy (like Mr Enter said, he wasnt making anyone miserable or scamming the kids, he just wanted the cool phone Rolf was THROWING away.), he wasnt really deserving the punishment.
And Double D constantly "THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS CURSES" behavior was just annoying, especially when Eddy was constantly getting tortured by the phone right on his front. There are much better episodes.
But Ed was still funny!
"Eddy's in pain now, he will have to call you back!"
When I looked at the description on the main page, and saw those big bold words... I declared that I needed to take a shower.
That big text really caught my eye you ingenious bastard! :D
I just have one for for you mister!
For a while I thought Spike was rubbing one out in the shower which struck me as odd for a dragon his age. It wasn't until he made his speech did I realize he was peeing.
I guess he won't ever be allowed to use Rarity's bath anymore when he visits her...
Rarity should have showered at Discord's...
That would have ended well.
This is why you never use your friends' showers. . . Brilliant story, anyway.
Poor Rarity... Next time ask Zecora for a shower or maybe use her title as element of Generosity to ask for a shower in the castle of Celestia... Or maybe ask Discord for one.
The nostalgia... I give you a score of...
Just reading the title and description alone, I know exactly what show and episode you are referring to.
Ahhh, love that episode. Along with this fic!
That show was my childhood
Hey! Leave the fourth wall breaking to Pinkie!
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That would have been a lot funnier if the lines actually made sense.
6915761 Inspired by Dr. Atlas written by Pinkie?
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6915547 I think this guy used the Pinkie scene to reference another story of his!
I wish there was a group for ponified episodes like this. I remember seeing a pony version of "can you spare a dime?" from spongebob
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Your avatar goes so well with your comment.
Happy Tuesday!
Ed Edd n' Eddy! Oh my god, that episode makes me lol. I loved it when Double D went so crazy and dumped trash all over himself!
Guess Rarity needs find more than five friends.
And was the Changeling doing what I think it was doing with Pinkie in the tub?
Since it's the beginning of the sentence, the "s" should be capitalized.
So, you realize you could have just asked Twilight to cast a cloud-walking spell on you before asking me, right?
...
Would you excuse me one moment?
*walking away noises*
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!
*walking back noises*
Thank you, Rainbow, your contribution is appreciated.
Ed edd n eddy was one of the best shows ever before Cartoon Network became Sh*t, pardon my Prench.
6916841 She has six. But one's a dragon, so it's understandable that a brony would get confused and forget how to count.
You meant home-owning or rent-paying friends.
Oh. My. God. Whoever hates this story HAS to be extremely stupid. I LOVED 'Cleanliness is next to Edness' so I instantly liked this story.
6917492 I meant friends with bathtubs.
Reminds me of that episode of Ed, Edd, and Eddy where Double D tries to find a shower and gets filthy as fuck before he manages to take one.
I can imagine the next story's name :
"Rarity can't get her sleeping beauty"
or even better:
"Twilight cannot get her sleeping"
(where Twilight just wants to sleep but she can't because all Equestria needs her).
...
Please make it happen.
Some small typos/suggestions/nitpicks
-By whom? (Rarity would use proper grammar IMHO)
"yur" -> "yer" maybe? That's Applejack so I will ignore her "(and) me have" ;)
Arm in equines is OK but considering its placement "cannon" would make that pose less awkward
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optionally; Rarity - neat grammar - "there are two"
I would spell it "hoofful" or "hoof-ful"?
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How would that even work? Would like... the dirt crawl off of your body and go up the pipes?
6919078 His shower ADDS filth.
A very good read. It was like I was watching the episode again. Loved the subtle joke with Pinkie and Doomie
Hah!
Oh poor Rarity. This was hilarious though. It almost felt like an episode of MLP.
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that's what Dr Atlas based the story off of.
This story was hilarious.
This needs to be an actual episode of MLP.
ZIPPIDY DOO DA!!!
P.S. Preach Brother Spike! Preach!!!
6918819 That's the point.
Once again, you have split my sides.
Not only that, we see Doomie going deep sea diving in search of an elusive pink pearl!
Was I the only one who thought of Ed, Edd, & Eddy?
Cause Rarity seemed to react a lot like Edd.
LOVE the reference here!
HA! Love this kind of humor!
6916841 Nope, just trying to beat his record for holding his breath. Absolutely innocent right here.