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Not what you're thinking...

Sooo...The changelings were defeated right? The swarm went back to its homeland with their tails between their legs right?
Yep pretty much, so what's this changeling doing in ponyville? Queen Chrysalis didn't send it. so who did? what's it's objective? Can it be stopped before its too late?

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Visible spectre

Visible spectre #1 · Jun 5th, 2012 · · · Scouting (Prolouge) ·

Why does this take so long to write?!?! maybe I should stop playing Starcraft 2...

Your Friendly Neighbor

Your Friendly Neighbor #2 · Jun 7th, 2012 · · · The message ·

What the heck is this? I spot poor dialog structure, poor sentence structure, no plot. What is this even about? Put down the Starcraft, don't lace in terms from games in stuff where it doesn't belong.

Lengthen those chapters, put more detail, more feel. Feel the writing. Feel it! Like a groin kick. Feel it!