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Gol D Colt
Hey I'm Gol D Colt (or Gol for short) And I adore writing stories with massive tasty hoots and gender bent characters.
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I hope he's just trying to take her basket, and that she will resist him. I hate clop! I'm glad that you have left me questioning as to whether Fluttershy is going to get rutted by an animal or not.
OK, I didn't expected to make an R63 version of Rarityninto a wolf and the ending seems to be a great sequel hook. It'll be interesting to see how Elusive will fare against Flutterbat.
While it was pretty hot at the end, you might want to get some new proofreaders. I mean, the above is just on the first page already, and the grammar derps up quite a few times in the rest of the story.
Okay, I like this story a lot, and would like more of it, but there were some grammatical errors that could have been fixed, but other than that I give 9/10 Mustaches,
Nah, Lugia's Adventure raped it.
You have quite a few tense switches, pluralization errors, words left out, and incorrect punctuation marks. The actual story was good, but the grammar hurts it.
6706079 The sweet hell is that so that I may avoid it for the rest of my days?
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Hey guys while I appreciate you for telling me about the Grammar error within the fic. But could you please point out where the error is exactly and PM to me? Cause just telling me there a grammar error isn't really helping me fix the problem.
more of this would be nice
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Easier said than done. Take the changing tenses I mentioned, for example. You change tense pretty much every other sentence, sometimes even changing within the same sentence. That's the most common problem you have, and pointing out each example would mean pretty much just copying and pasting the entire story. It'd really just be easier for someone else to proof read and edit it for you. At least the actual story is good.
6706868 I'm not saying point out everyone you see. Just a couple of them so I can get an idea on what to fix.
6706480 a pokemon themed porn game.
Ha. Haha. Ha hah ahah ahahahaha AHAHAHAHAHAHA BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAAAHAHAHAAHAH
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But in all seriousness, that is a good story my good sir.
As one of the proofreaders, I didn't realise that Gol was planning to put it up when he did. I had been focusing on the overall story and dialogue first over the grammar, and was planning to fix that after.
Haaaaaawwwwwwwwt *drools stupidly*
I fucking love this. Flutterslut was born for sex!
Didn't know you'd post it already Gol D. From the looks of it, you had another editor still looking over it. Still, awesome story overall. Makes wish for a sequel or a spin-off of this story.
Now that I think about Fluttershy in this story and the big teeth part, I couldn't help but remember a few familiar and funny scenes from this Little Red Riding Hood cartoon I saw when I was little. It's a cartoon made by Good times Children's Classics.
- In this cartoon, this little girl can talk to animals and helps/befriends them.
- This creepy (furry) wolf stalking her in funny ways. (Surprised he didn't eat the grandma at the last part)
- The bit were the wolf reveals his true identity, the girl kicking him in the shin and the wolf chasing her.
- The talking animals chasing him away. Wolf falls into a river and gets thrown down a waterfall. Little girl finds her grandmother tied up in a (storage closet?) Happy ending. The End!
Honestly I was expecting Fluttershy to kick him in the nuts, runaway, get caught, and magic happens.
I enjoyed this story though. Great job!
<Rocks back and forth in corner>
It could use a good editing run. You shift between past and present tense almost constantly.
However, the story itself is very well done.
I truly enjoyed this...I have to say though, that you have a hell of a hook for a sequel because that last line just told us that Fluttershy has taken a nap and Flutterbat (or Flutterslut, if you prefer) has come out to play with the Big Bad Wolf....I hope Elusive is ready for it, it's thanks to him that Flutters found that orchard with the apples, and we know she's nuts about them....
Seriously, now I want to see how Elusive reacts to Flutterbat. After all, they probably have a week before Grandmother actually comes back home....just saying
I really like this story. The only problem I have with it is that there was no knotting. I'd love to see more though.
little red riding hood you say?
sorry, but when i saw the title i had to
6839385 same here, i couldnt tell if the wolf had a horsecock or a dogcock, so it was a tad confusing on that end. Would have loved to see her get stuck on the blowjob x3
Ugh, the punctuation threw me through a loop. I came here on a recommendation, but... Yeah...
I like it
All in favor of this story getting a sequel say I.