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Sprincess Pielight Tarkle... or Princess Twilight Sparkle (once the script was wiped clean) may have collected a bit of Smooze goo after the Gala. She might have been researching it. She also possibly spilled a little while running an experiment on its properties.
There would be only two potential issues with this, highly theoretical, and by no means representative, situation: 1... it's from a highly magical, elder beast, and 2... it's immune to conventional magic.

Things could potentially escalate.

<Spike facepalms and writes a letter>
Okay. Things escalated quickly.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 17 )

:moustache: Tirek :facehoof:
:duck: We could never make a mess like that on our worst nights:twilightoops: We?!
:moustache: Dragons don't perspire
:raritywink: and ladies glisten .
:twilightangry2:


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Shouldn't The Smooze have an other tag?

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Nah, ol'Smoozey doesn't have enough screentime for that. (Shrug) On the other hand... I might tag it as random, if I haven't already.

:moustache: Twilight? You're acting like a jelly donut.
:duck: all sticky
:applejackconfused: and gooey
:fluttercry: full of smooze
:pinkiegasp: and one squeeze
:rainbowlaugh: splatters the wall with filling
:facehoof: you noticed?
:trollestia: You need help my little ponies, The Doughnut Clinics of Equestria 1-800-NODONUT
:derpytongue2: why couldn't she be a muffin?
:moustache: just lucky I guess?

:pinkiegasp: Pop goes the Smoozel
:applejackconfused: Oh boogers
:fluttercry: Twilight's a snail
:raritycry: Spikey get it off! It Stings it burns, IT'S WORSE THEN DIRT! please Spikey!
:rainbowderp: I broke Twilight!!
:moustache: It took me hours to clean Rarity, We're going to Los Pegasus tomorrow, don't see why....
:raritystarry: He licked me totally clean...I LOVED IT :twilightoops:
:trollestia: TWILIGHT'S a JELLY DOUGHNUT?

:duck: Twilight the night light
:moustache: On sale at your favorite barnyard bargains store
:ajsmug: right next to the apples
:pinkiehappy: across from the party supplies
:rainbowlaugh::fluttercry:

Three minutes later, and floating another three mugs of tea behind her, she returned to the room feeling much relieved. With a smile, she plopped back down, pulled out her checklist, glanced over the room to note a decided lack of flames, and inhaled deeply as she turned to peer once more through the arcane lens at her sample of Smooze goo (politely and serepticiously obtained) from the Grand Galloping Gala.... only to suddenly feel her nose burn, sinuses constrict, and eyes squint as the horrid smell of something burning forced a violent sneeze from her.

*surreptitiously

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Yay! Typo caught... I wonder if I can use it to battle against pokemon?
Seriously though, Thanks! I don't edit these things, so if's great when someone catches something and helps me to look more competent.

OK this is a good comedy fic so far

Spike and his deadpan sidekick logic is hilarious here

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Pfffffff😂😂😂😂

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Your killing me with these

This one didn't have a comment so here is a comment:pinkiehappy:

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I'm just hoping it was entertaining enough to be enjoyable the whole way through. <smirks> And... Thank you for commenting. Most folks skim through things and keep their thoughts to themselves. The author, however, is a fickle beast that craves attention and feasts upon the comments of others.
Or, maybe that's just me.
But anywho...
Hope you enjoyed!

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You know... I just read this comment again after so long... and I still chuckled. Well done.

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:pinkiehappy: Yea , My work here is complete
:moustache: You should of seen the look on the doctors face
:duck: When he slapped our first foal
:ajsmug: She looked normal almost
:rainbowhuh: she had little bitty claws
:yay: and a cute belly covered in soft scales
:twilightoops: But when she cried she belched fire , It wasn't so bad until those oxygen tanks exploded
:moustache: it was so cool
:trollestia: Besides it's covered in Celestia care
:facehoof: I have a headache
:duck: I'm still laughing , If it wasn't for "Princess Twilight Jelly nut" Spike and I would of never seen Las Pegasus

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