After becoming a better pony and making new friends, Diamond Tiara realizes she has yet to make up for the way she treated her best friend. When she tries however, she is met with an unforgiving Silver Spoon. In desperate need of help, she enlist the help of the Cutie Mark Crusaders in trying to find a way to make it up to Silver Spoon. Will she be able to become friends with Silver Spoon again, or will they forever be apart from one another?
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Well you definitely captured the most realistic take on this situation I've seen yet, showing both Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon clinging to their own erroneous ways. Diamond's realization of how she mistreated Silver struck me as rather sudden, as did Silver's acknowledgement that she should give Diamond another chance, but overall a good effort for a one off fic.
Well done!
The best episodes inspire the best fics.
Have a super deluxe chocolate milkshake on the house... Oh, and a like too.
6539554 Ya, I did plan on spanning it out a bit more, I was just losing track of where I wanted it to go. I felt I'd be better to rush to the conclusion than ruin it with a long drawn out story not knowing where it's going. I'm glad you liked it, I do try to put some realism into a story rather than the "Disney" touch of everything being alright all the time.
Love it
Love it
Any more upcoming stories or ideas?
6540042 It's a good possibility. This one was done for Equestria Daily's writers corner thing. I also posted another one today about CMC graduating without cutie marks (I started it before Crusaders of the Lost Mark). I have a couple other short story ideas, but I am also trying my hand at a full length novel. A couple chapters are posted, but the reception didn't go over well. I put it on hiatus till I can get more chapters done hoping it was disliked because of where I made it so far.