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Oh...
My...
Goodness...
I don't know whether to give a thumbs up for making me laugh so much or thumbs down for... Everything XD
Good job, you did the one job you're supposed to do as a writer. Entertain and you did more than that. Good job mate
I love how connected all these stories are
6577598 It's the small things that make his stories great.
Gave it an upvote, no need to read it. It has weed, so it automatically gets a 10/10 IGN.
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6577621 thanks dad
The hugbox is getting started huh? Alright. You really should stop writing and take some classes on the subject. Your community college should offer courses and I also recommend you lose the hugbox. They are possibly one of the worst things you could have when you're starting out.
6579921 Lose the hug box? done! Now, what college do you recommend that will help me learn to write better my little pony fan fictions.
6580171 Your local community college.
6580286 well i found my local community college, it doesn't say anywhere on their website that they have my little pony classes....what a shame..
6580292 I was talking about WRITING classes genius.
6580301 why would i pay to write my little pony fan fiction when i could do it here for free.
6580305 I meant you should enroll in writing classes at your local community college. Writing classes that will teach you to understand and use English writing formats, rules, styles, and conventions. There is no way I can say this in a simpler method.
6580328 do i have to pay for it?
6580332 When you went to school, did you go in the little bus? You are definitely giving off that vibe.
6580344 yes
6580348 I thought so. I was a TA for the special needs class and there was some serious deja vu going when I read your fics.
6580353 alright, but do i have to pay for it?
6580357 It's community college. What do you think genius?
6580372 look man, i'm not paying to write my little pony fan fictions. That's final.
6580376 For the last time, in the simplest way I could say it, you aren't paying to write. You are paying a small fee to learn basic English writing conventions and formats. This will make you write better. Readers will upvote and like your stories instead of laughing at them and downvoting. Your English will improve.
6580779 yay
6581524 my inglish isnt bad, and like i siad before. i aint paying for my little pony classes. i dont understand why you keep repeating yourself, its simple. all you have to do is read my previous comments.
6581690 You speak when spoken to hugbox tool. Not before.
6581688 Your "inglish" is on par with a six year old's and I said Writing class, NOT a "my little pony class". Are you even old enough to be using the internet?
6584374 Don't you dare speak to my husband like that!
6584387 you can't fool me, ill never fall for yuor clever ruse to get me to go to college!
6584374
So, let me get this straight; anyone who challenges your opinion is a tool?
Look, I get that you're giving your sincerest criticisms. And there's nothing wrong with that, I do it all the time! But you're not really, uh, giving him much to work with. Other than telling him to go to college, which is more so a suggestion rather than anything constructive. So, since you feel inclined to criticize his writing, why not share some of your knowledge on the subject? Surely, if you insist on replying to all his comments, you have enough time to type up an analysis? It's definitely way more productive than arguing on the internet, that's for sure.
6584476 Fair enough hugbox, here goes. The characterisation is wrong, the "humor" is forced, and anyone that's only just seen people smoke weed could tell this was written by somebody with no experience, first or secondhand. The "author's" note at the beginning serves no purpose and goes to show why children should have nothing to do with politics. That being said, I'll admit it was wrong to suggest the "author" take supplemental writing classes as it's clear said person hasn't reached puberty nor middle school.
6590066
I'd like to point out that not once did I praise this story in particular. The only comment I posted bordering on that territory was this one
6577598
Really don't know where you're going with that whole hugbox thing.
If you're talking about the opening with all of the main cast, the main cast's odd behavior is the direct result of the influence of drugs and not bad characterization mkay
Humor is subjective, and at no point does the story directly order you to find it's contents humorous. What's even your definition of "forced humor"?
As in...?
I've noticed from a lot of your comments that you love to make claims and never provide any examples.
"this author has no experience" doesn't work by itself as an argument because Spiderman the Hedgehog never stated or even implied that he's never had a first or secondhand experience with weed.
well uh
that's sorta why it's an author's note pal
it doesn't have any impact on the story, and therefore cannot diminish the quality
also this
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ad_hominem
6590066
Why would we write a story about a touchy subject like this if it didn't affect us?
Also why do you keep saying hugbox? He clearly told you he got rid of it right here 6580171 see?
What the fuck is going on here...?
6591241 worry not.
That was the weirdest thing Ive ever read.
7673325 nice name
Still a better love story than Reefer Madness.