Thank you for all the support, the ride has been nice <3
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Before the Humane 6's monthly sleepover, Applejack suggests that they should all try horseback riding. Sunset is less than eager to do this, but she tries it anyway. I mean, how hard can it be for an ex-pony to ride a horse in this world? Right?
....right?
This is a one-shot. The Twilight in this story is the human universe Twilight, "Sci Twi"
Takes place in the Dagifire timeline.
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I hereby dub Rainbow Dash: Flatty McFlatflat.
6631986 A flat chest is a status symbol.
Hilarious XD
Sunset Sunset... haven't you learned already? Only Pinkie can tempt fate like that and go unscathed.
6722671
As a former student of Celestia, you think she would xD
Aww i was hoping to see a little bit more past Sunset's outburst.
7242219
A good story leaves you wanting more. And maybe someday getting more.
Hahaha poor Sunset
Poor Sunset. I think Midnight enjoyed the ride more than she did.
That cover art, though! Had me rolling on the floor laughing!
That... wasn't very good.
The ending made little sense while the meat of the story was pretty bare bones.
In fact it just makes Sunset look like a whiny bitch just because it wore her out. And that's after you clearly spent most of the story trying to make it look like she would have a different reason.
You had a good idea but your execution was sloppy, making this a pretty low-grade story overall.
7454300 Well, it was my second fanfic ever, I'm slowly improving. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
7454300
Didn't have to be so shitty about it, tbh. S'like telling someone who's barely starting to draw that their art looks like absolute trash when they have 0 experience. T'was all in good fun, yo. Could'a been more helpful than hindering. Let people learn from their mistakes, not feel bad for trying.
And hey maybe you were being nice about it. Then my bad. I apologize. My bad for being edgy. But still
Just have a little fun about it. Was meant for a laugh; it was an experimental one-shot and not for much else.
Chill <3
Like
Ugh.
Thanks though
Love,
-toomuchsalt
7502073 I was being nice about it, but that doesn't mean I shouldn't be harsh.
The very fact I commented at all is proof that I actually enjoyed the story enough to care about giving critique.
Besides, pointing out mistakes now should help prevent the author developing any bad habits which will lead to them being an even better author down the line.
7502117
You've got a point. I'm just an overprotective lug over Nyxxie here. I don't want her confidence going down the toilet. I know criticism can be hard sometimes, and evidently taken the wrong way. I apologize for the mix-up in intention. Blehhh.
The G1 ponies have returned! Kinda....
7617825 THANK YOU FOR NOTICING
7618048 I couldn't have been the only one.
7619020
Seems you are actually, at least of those who commented.
I love the cover art.
Looks like something tells me that Sunset might need some riding lessons.
Yeah, I can see why now.
How am I not surprised at about that last part.
Oofity
Dang, that must of hurt.
Yep, it sure did.
Figured that's be her response.