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hahha, I don't normally ship this coupe but this fic was well done, you just earned a follower XD
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Well, I don't ship these two either XD No romantic feelings involved whatsoever
Thanks!
I don't like lesbian, at all, but this wasn't bad. So I'll like it.
Applejack and Maud. Who would've thunk it'd be enjoyable to read? Bravo!
And you brought up an interesting point: since they pony up, would they go into heat?
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Who would've thought it'd be enjoyable to write? Seriously, I had a lot of fun with this one XD
And yeah, this story was never really planned; it ran off of the first line about Applejack being all hot and stuff, then (even though I don't really know much about horses in heat), it was the only thing I could think of and so I planned it out from there and was like:
Okay. I'm going to write this.
But yes, now that the issue has been brought up, I'd say going into heat either every month, or maybe just a month past their first transformation is possible. Of course, that's something you'll never see in canon XD
6643061 My pleasure :fluttershysmile:
That was hot... need more Maud Pie lesbian fics
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Thanks :)
Heh, if you say so. I actually thought Maud would be the most hated in a clopfic, but I'll see what I can do. Anyone in particular you'd like to see her with?
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Sunset Shimmer
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Sure, why not? I'll see what I can do
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Sweet, cool... thanks
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Welcome :)
This was a great read and the only criticism I can give is that the paragraphs that close together makes the story a bit hard to read.
But again, great work.
Possible sequels?
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That's not really an error, it's a writer's choice of style. Not everyone writes with separated paragraphs.
I was thinking about writing, um, sequels (I guess, even though they're back in time), but I'm working on other stuff now
"get something’ to drink." -- somethin'
Since you write some of Applejack's thoughts, I would've liked to know what she assumed would happen; she knows but we don't.
AJ being "smooth" with that proposal... and then Maud: “Say no more. It’s no problem. Anything to help.” she seems pretty excited to me. I like the touch of her being slightly startled when AJ calls out, but not showing any surprise at all otherwise.
Does she already have feelings for the other girl that she's denying, or is she suppressing the development of deeper feelings?
^ this is a little out of place, considering the context of 'too hot to sleep' and the start of sexual activity; perhaps the relief rendered is almost enough for her to sleep?
The sudden inclusion of Maud's thoughts was a little jarring (though I appreciate the juxtaposition with AJ's immediate confusion
esp after AJ already affirmed that she could understand the girl"the oldest of the Pie family" sounds like Maud is the older person in the entire family, rather than the oldest sibling. More of a nitpick, but for future reference.
It took a read-through or two, but I see what you're saying and it's a pitfall of same-sex writing: pronouns. You actually did quite well on keeping the two separate though so
what does this even mean
Why weren't they ready before? She was already tasting, what else are taste buds for?
Applejack is the receiver though, isn't she?
As well as the speakerThe ending where AJ rejoins the others is pretty funny. Since this takes place about a month after their initial pony transformations and
poor, outcastedSunset Shimmer is separated from the Rainbooms, is it safe to assume this takes place before Rainbow Rocks? If so, why would Sunset have any reason to think any of them went into heat, since she herself probably hadn't?Sorry for the ramblings, good read, well done
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It's a little bit awkward to read stuff like this on sexual stories, but I like what you said at the end, so thanks
Sunset seemed separated from them? What made it seem like she was? I wasn't trying to give off that impression.
6803478 Sorry, I didn't mean to make it awkward
I was just trying to give feedback oh your story regardless of the sexual nature
To me, this implied that Sunset isn't part of the Rainbooms, therefore separated from them
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Oh, well, I didn't mean it to be like that. It's just they were so absorbed in each other and what was going on, they forgot she was there. It happens. At least, I didn't mean for it to be like that. It was supposed to be after RR, but I guess I didn't think about it that much.
I have no words as to what I've just read... Am I dead
nah just traumatized by good writing
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Aw, thank you!
Yes I like that!
Needs a squeal! Plus I must stalk you brrwwhahaha.
What kind of clothing is Maud wearing in this?
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...good question XD
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I'll have to answer that later
6896729 I'll wait.
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...Her clothes?
I kinda am embarrassed to read this story again, but I'm pretty sure Maud never got undressed, or at least not as much as Applejack.
In that case, she could be wearing anything. Applejack was in the same PJ's as she was in Late Night Apple Cider I think, but I dunno what Maud wears to bed XD
6898237 Me neither.
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Exactly. So her clothes could be anything, really.
6899720 Like these?
img02.deviantart.net/c9f6/i/2015/005/5/e/__human_pony_18___by_the_butcher_x-d8cs5wu.png
orig14.deviantart.net/7701/f/2014/267/0/f/midnight_tea_break_by_uotapo-d80chlf.jpg
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If that's what you want
Seriously, why though? You don't need to know Maud's clothes to read this story XD
6900009 I was just curious. You can still edit.