Every week Twilight has had a slumber party with the Mane 6. On one such sleepover she experiences an unexpected magical surge. To comfort her her friends share embarrassing stories from their own lives.
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RoyalBardofCanterlot
Celestia and Luna's royal bard. Nature is my God, Art is my religion, Love is the Law. Concordia Invictus
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Good overall, but seperate the first paragraph.
IT'S TOO LONG–
I just read this through and its a good story however you may wish to proof read a little as a few words snuck through that needed correcting.
Shon (shone misspelt) is the past tense of shine so the sentance may need to be corrected to 'the room was practically shining'
There was also 'tomoorow' and 'sings' should be 'songs'
6704310 Yeah, this was an early work. I need to edit it.
Good story. Cute little story but grammar slips through. Not liking or disliking just for that reason. Sorry.
Flutters is scared of toilets...how?
This was soooo adorable! I loved it!
Although, I can't help but feel I've read something like this somewhere before. The whole Twilight bed-surging theme...
Anywho, very well done.
Oh Twilight, it isn't all bad. You hit Rainbow Dash with a book!
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I have, too. Been trying to find it.
6705028 Could've been worse. It could've been the bookshelf.
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Two bookshelves, maybe? Purple pony princess IS powerful, after all.
6705817 Perhaps the whole wall
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I had a bad experience with potty training.
6705016 Yeah, this is an edited re-post.
6706185 UHHH...okay
6706187 Thought so.
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Probably even the supports on said wall which'll make the whole room collapse
6707642 Then the rest of the library. There's no lower floor holding it up.
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Then the whole castle!
6707779 Maybe it'll collapse into a sinkhole.
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And the sinkhole will destroy all of Ponyville
6707861 Then suck in Canterlot!
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After that, Appleoosa!
6709414 Then the Crystal Empire.
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Then the Everfree Forest!
6711102 On to Griffinstone.
6711112 And spreads to Manehatten.
6711122 Then drags in Baltimare.
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Eats up Fillydelphia.
6711280 Sucks in Los Pegasus.
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Absorbs Starlight's town..
6712912 Drowns Saddle Arabia.
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Takes in Vanhoover..
6714365 Overpowers the Everfree.
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I already said that, but aight.
Nibbles in Seaddle.
Here's a list of all the places in Equestria if you need it.
http://www.equestriandreamers.com/forum/index.php?topic=1046.0
6714468 Whoops!
White Tail Woods, then.
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Eh, no problem.
Chomps up San Fransicolt!
6714881 Swallows Trottingham.
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Takes Whinneapolis in the bandwagon.
6717654 Drags in Dodge Junction.
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Slurp in Bridleway
6718061 Suck up Seaddle!
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Take down Applewood~!
6718161 Builds up a massive vortex that sucks up Cloudsdale!
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And all the chaos reaches Discord's dimension and sucks that in as well!
6718200 Then breaches reality and absorbs Tartarus!
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After that, it happens to get into the fandom world and eat up the Lunar Republic!
6720963 Then swallows the Solar Empire!
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Then the sinkhole reaches Canterlot High and eats it up too!
6721327 Then goes after Crystal Prep!
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Then it reaches Chrysalis' school (if she has one)!