Falling In

Twilight succeeds in going to equestria and learning about magic but she pulls along a lot of unwanted guests along the way. So with everyone hating Twilight and Sunset Shimmer having to face her old demons. Along with secrets being spilled as time goes on. How will it all work out?

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And we all go tumbling down · 7th Dec 2015 · 1,046 words
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Xanderfox

Xanderfox #1 · Dec 8th, 2015 · · · And we all go tumbling down ·

shouldn't all of the Canterlot high and cCystal prep students be ponfied now, thus Twilight and Sunset should have woken up in a gaggle of confused possibly panicking ponies?

diablo4000

diablo4000 #2 · Dec 8th, 2015 · · · And we all go tumbling down ·

That the thing if it was the portal from the statue then yeah. but this was a tear in space and time caused by Human Twilight on a power trip so it wasn't the same.
Also the portal was thru a magic mirror made to change a person's shape.
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Mr cold ghost

Mr cold ghost #3 · Dec 8th, 2015 · 1 · 1 · And we all go tumbling down ·

Well let's see where this story goes. It should be interstating.

Elric of Melnipony

Elric of Melnipony #4 · Dec 8th, 2015 · · · And we all go tumbling down ·

equestria
twilight
sunset shimmer

Proper nouns should be capitalized.

a lout of

"lot"

So with everyone hating twilight and sunset shimmer having to face her old demons along with secrets being spilled along the way for everyone how will it all work out?

That sentence is a mess. Have someone read it out loud to you and see how it sounds.

P.S. Both words in your user name are spelled wrong.

jpony