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Bright Keys


Getting over 6 years of writer's block.

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Ponyville has become a very different place. While it is still slow and peaceful, ponies have come to realize Twilight Sparkle's regal status, and have flocked to the small town. Since then, it has expanded into a small city with its own guard force, with Rainbow dash acting as captain of the small group of soldiers. Everything is normal, at least until a group of illegal Changelings is found and it is revealed that one of Rainbow's friends may not be what they seem...


The cover art is by Underpable, used with permission.
Will involve some out of character ponies, specifically Rainbow Dash.
Offer some feedback if you like! :twilightsmile:

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )
Comment posted by cherished deleted Dec 28th, 2020

Interesting start.

Welcome home, Dashie. Time for some catching up.

Comment posted by Bright Keys deleted Oct 21st, 2019

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I was waiting to see what score that story gonna get but your comment make me want to read it

I like this, it has potential. :ajsmug: keep up the great work!

I think just a little rushed there at the end but otherwise this chapter was A-Okay

7075329 I'd been struggling with writer's block on this for months and didn't want to lose my stride.

This is a really in interesting concept, and i’d love to see it continued!
It’s really good, and i like the way that it’s written. The characters seem really close to that in the show and movie, and I wouldn’t probably mistake this as something that’s had been written by one of the scrip writers for the show if i didn’t know any better!

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