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DrakeyC
Writer, reviewer, creator of Filly Fantasy VI, occasional PMV maker, and uploader of mildly amusing image macros to Derpibooru. https://www.patreon.com/drakeyc
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Yessssss.... this pleases me.
lol ya ya, I know Sunny's nonviable but still....
That could use a comma after "killing", to remove any ambiguity about who's being killed.
Other than that, I fully approve of this story.
Sunset: I'm just gonna get some gay pride on my windshield. GET BACK HERE YOU LITTLE CYAN BITCH!!
6749423 gg
A sequel? This is the best Christmas present ever!
this is amazing
6749416 Oh dear. Thank you for pointing that out, it has been corrected.
WEI? WHAT HAVENT SEEN HAVE BEEN SEEN BUT THE WOARLD? KNOW IS THE STORY TO LOOK UPON BY EYEBALL, IS WRITTEN. A SECOND PART. HOW DO YOU SEE IT? I DONT SEE IT. SENSUAL RELATIONSHIP IN A STORY. HOW TO TELL ALOUD? DONT TELL TO THE WEAK GUY.
Any chance Sunset will do it with the others?
Maybe even the other Twilight... who also has a penis?
6750256 What.
6750256 see kids drugs fry your brains DONT do DRUGS!!!
... Fairly certain you meant "beg".
6750558
I THINK THAT LATELY CHILD HAS MONEY...
I've read many fanfics that says the opposite, Twilight.
That last part killed me, man!
You got great potential for a fantastic series, which someone smarter than me will have to name.
Is Sunset going to do the Principals too, I mean she'll obviously do the humane five (or six now).
Think you meant chest
She's listening to the heat of her lips?
Should 'unless' be 'until' there?
6752148 Thank you for pointing out my errors, they'll be corrected shortly.
There are, in fact, bras that hook in the front.
Sunset-on-Midnight-on-Twilight, gogogo.
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Who knows, maybe ponies-turned-human are just incompatible with full-blooded humans?
Wow. Wow. That was some good shit right there.
6753741 lol
6753741 In that case, maybe Sunset could still get Twilight pregnant since they're both, like, ponies.
Meh, it's an interesting premise but I think you could have written the sex better. It just seemed very out of character and uninspiring, a good enough story as is but the clop needs some work.
SunLight!!! yaaaay :3
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That's the idea. Did human Twilight get a 'horn', too?
6755399 Well, she did go through the same transformation as Sunset, so I'd say it is entirely possible. Then again, maybe Sunset's inherent magic had some effect somewhere in the process or some shit like that. If Sci-Twi does, I'm totally looking forward to a 'Twilight fucks herself' pun
One of the BEST fanfics I have read. 20/10
and now for a third part lol.
HEAVEN. PURE HEAVEN.
A true true friend helps a friend in need!
"I pee out my vagina like normal" ooh, that killed me a little. lol at Sunset trying to be subtle about penis... What if Sunset is fertile and they just don't know RD's pregnant yet??
aww it's actually really cute how RD/SS interact. How rude of Sunset to make the others wait outside while she has her way with Twilight.
I really enjoy the brief rapey vibes that subside as Sunset recognizes Twilight's distress. It's actually a lot of fun seeing a futa piece that considers relations from both male and female perspectives (of course it happens, but it's usually not as raw or emotional or relatable). goes back to that whole recognizing the plight of the opposite gender thing
super hot
At first, I thought Sunset was touching her through the panties (I realized I was wrong in the next paragraph)
"She rose to her feet" but we were never given indication she was anything but on her feet.
y'know, Sunset got more naked than Twi did... she was wearing panties when she was lifted, but they somehow disappeared by the time she was getting her pussy eaten. I may or may not usually be a stickler for this, but there's been so much detail about the everything already it seemed wrong to start making leaps.
also Twilight keeps her shoes onI like this as a deviation from the instructed 'Tell me to make you cum' and sort of alludes that Twi has at least a little experience in the sex department
"After what seemed like an eternal" - eternity?
"churching in her balls" - is that the word you really want to use?
“What’s more appealing to you, killing Rainbow Dash or having a threesome with her?” and the ensuing banter is priceless
and absolutely would readas with your previous piece, it was quite enjoyable. however, I feel this has a bit of a downfall in that it's hard to visualize the entire image as we really have no idea what this place looks like and the scene is too focused on what Sunset's doing to Twilight's body (strange complaint for smut, I know) rather than less-sexy aspects of practicality (eg: making Twilight stand in her panties the whole time until it's feasible to throw her on the conveniently-there panty-displacing desk)
I like the juxtaposition of Sunset having fantasized about Twilight kneeling for her, but instead does that for the other girl (physically) while forcing Twi to submit verbally.
also good continuity, I have high hopes for you as a writer
Batman: "Quick, Robin! To the fap-mobile!"
Robin: "I'll just stay in the fap-cave."
Sex, murder, and the option of science in one choice?
Seems about right.
(Sorry, it had to be done.)
6761012 You mean, the fap-cave's closet? huehue
6760307 You are good at analyzing a story. You missed a plus. The author didn't have humans in the cover and instead label it Anthro, ffs. lol I really hate when this happens. Or they give them human skin qualities and still have the anthro tag.
6789671 oh thanks
honestly I don't always look at/remember the tags
Funny how Twilight had a concern that Sunset might get Rainbow pregnant. They aren't exactly the same species, but Twilight and Sunset are. Would there be a chance that maybe Sunny's a father now? Good sequel material.
Anatomy fail: women don't pee out of their vagina, but out of a separate urethral opening just above the vagina.
Of course, it's possible that Sunset really hasn't paid any attention in sex ed...
Good story, funny and sexy. If this becomes a series, my vote is for an 8-way slumber party/orgy( counting both human and pony Twilight
)plus maybe bring in Lyra/Bon Bon/Derpy/Spitfire/Fleetfoot and/or the girls from Crystal Prep for a "Super Awesome" slumber party/orgy grande finale.
Less what, and more who, more accurately, you.
Ah the Mathematician's Answer. Technically correct, but doesn't answer the question.
so, would it be safe to assume there will be a part three featuring TwiDashShimmer?
6750737 naaaaaaaaah!
6755834 only 20/10? Heresy
6839977 I KNOW
IT MUST BE OVER 9000
6839982 at the very least!
I like this story and the first one. Sunset and Twilight talking about killing or having a threesome with Rainbow... I was so for them having a threesome.
But that is up to the author but keep up the great work, hopefully to see another story. 
