Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.
With a date already unprepared, your mother and father barge in and invite you and Fluttershy to dinner. Even though you deny the chance, Fluttershy relentlessly wants to know them. As it would seem, it would turn out to be nice at first, but may take a turn for the worse.
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Well that was a nice start to the night...
Another great story, as usual and man did Anon's parents really ****** up his date with Fluttershy with their dislike for animals. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Also, man did Fluttershy knows how to wear sexy dresses.
you have too many great stories I want you too continue, but I know you can't and it makes me sad. . .
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Give it another day or so, it shouldn't take long since this is a two parter.
6758908 so tho is a short story?
Wow!
I would be soooo FURIOUS if my parents did that. Their obliviousness would be the death of everything I hold dear. Why would they bring up a story on me (I call myself Indra for Anon) killing a animal in front of a animal lover? I swear they did this crap on purpose!
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Yeah, the next part should be around the same number as the first, but that's just the idea. Do not worry, I'm getting the details out now.
I have had my sister try something like this with one of my girlfriends. She said it was because she would have learned it all eventually. I suspect she didn't like her and wanted her to break off the relationship... i still have not forgiven her for that.
Great story!
Great story. I loved the ending.
I'm happy with how this ended. Very good.
In one word? Rushed. Try sending it off to an editor and/or properly space the paragraphs, it might help.
They want a son that will stand up for himself, but punish him when he does? Makes sense. Positive reinforcement is great!
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That's creepily similar to something that happened to me.
I like this. the Comedy really kept me interested good job
ladies, I know i'm beautifu- NO! stay away! but my parents are just the worst and don't know when to shut their mouths, so for your sakes, please... stay away, I know it must pain you to hear this but this is how it must be...
how is Rarity in this fic , or more likely where.
This was a good little story and i will be adding it to my library but because i come from a hunting background I do have to say that Deer do not live in family groups. Bucks rut and leave and the doe drives the fawn off in the fall. That and there are tags for deer and hunting season is in the fall, not the spring. At least that's how this is set up in my eyes. That's my two cents, still good though!
Damn fluttershy, your a horrible girlfriend!