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a bit of a fast pace for the opening but im liking the idea of (non-sex) slave Twilight. keep it up
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Pfft. Not reading this now.
6772607 I only say non-sex since there is no sex tag ... YET
Plus it's only the first chapter so-
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I did read it, and I quite enjoyed it. As 6772619 said, it's a little bit rushed, but there's always time for detail later.
Great first chapter can't wait for the next keep up the great work
I love it, so far it is interesting hmm I would love it if he forced her to read and perform dark magic just to spite Celestia
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Shadow of Doubt I love that idea and remember Dark magic corrupts those who use it so if Sombra wanted to break her that's one way.
Well... that was blunt.
7035021 Interesting idea, It seams like something Sombra would do. Also 7174357 That is true Dark magic would take over her mind, turning her slightly dark Sounds like he can kill two birds with one stone.
Dormammu, I've come to bargain!
7822469 ?
7823311 Have you seen Doctor Strange? Just thought of Twilight and Sombra in that position... "Sombra, I've come to bargain!"
7823406 I've never seen it. Thank you for explaining that reference to me!
7823427 You're welcome.
I thought it was against site rules to post a chapter to notify readers about things like this.
Is this incomplete or on a hiatus? You haven't posted in ages and I love this fic!
I really love the story idea keep writing hopefully it's all goes well
update plz