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Tempest_Flare


Long lost alicorn of destiny. Lives on earth in a human form. Loves displaced fanfics.

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Interesting story will be looking out for any new chapters.

Kinda half half on this so so very confused. Am i missing something.

7348732 Na it's suppose to be a little confusing as the memory thing will be explained in latter chapters

7348793 well alright then, I shall keep my eye on it and don my afro made of candy floss.

Didn't see that coming. Good job I can't wait for more!!!:rainbowkiss:

also that is a good idea a backstory would explain a few things and help the reader understand a bit more

I wonder how this is going to play out all in all a good chapter

7432961 you mean the party or Moonie's return:twilightsmile:#random mustache:moustache:

7444415 then it shall! 'runs the suspense through you heart like a blade' DIE FOALISH MORTAL LET THE SUSPENSE OVERWELM YOUR VERY SOUL!

7445667
*Dies from being stabbed through the heart by suspense*

7448710 dammit i killed him oh well.* uses forbidden spell to revive him*live again!

7448721 now find your blood smear and collect your souls

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Thank you, one less thing to worry about.

7555334 here you go *hands you the souls minus the ones gathered protecting the bag*

Strange...
Not good not bad.

>>Tempest_Flare Can develop still. Werds retain in any case in the eye until I formed for myself ne opinion.

7563366 again thanks for your honesty I know I can still develop in fact it's still just getting started it I'm planning on doing at least 50 chapters for this story so yeah it's going to be a really long one my longest I hope at least for now:twilightsmile:

7877359 me and my editor or revising the fourth chapter right now once I get past the writer's block off startup on the next chapter

You update what did you update because I don't see it

8176725 I hit the wrong button Meant to hit edit and accidentally hit publish sorry.:twilightsheepish::facehoof:

Am I supposed to take this seriously?

8342251 Never! It's fan fiction just read it and enjoy. I wrote it to be read not to be taken seriously. Sheesh! It's meant to be fun nothing more nothing less.:facehoof:

Good chapter can't wait for more

Well it's interesting, but you are way too fast and I think these much alicorns at ones is a bit much for the start of this adventure

I get it. You think they're op already but only Flutters and Twilight have continuous access to any extra abilities as of yet. Aj will become Timberjack but that comes later. Also the everfree is going to have active plundervines and will be overall much more dangerous So don't worry. Alicorns are much more common due to Era Galaxian/Lady Faustacorn rewriting time after her husband's death by Dannin's hand. Yes, this is a fall of Equestria story. But it'll have much more death of the Caribou.

though Pinkie and Pinka have chaos magic they can't really control it.

ps. most of the mane six will discover their alicorn abilities after they connect with their elements pinkie and pinka control laughter together

*Reads Description*

... I found that I was destined to become something more I became Twilight Tempest Aurora Flare Sparkle Daughter of Luna, Nightmare Moon, Tiffany Lee Davis, and Twilight Velvet. Elements of both Destiny and Magic, Alicorn of Friendship and Magic, and the only Alicorn to realize the the legend of the Dragonoid...

Wha? :rainbowhuh:

8447250 I still have to change the description but I don't want to till I finish the first arc. Please just read on.

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