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ChaoticHarmony


Hey guys! I write sadfics and sadfic accessories! Oh, and I also do comedy things. Yeah. Feel free to check out my stuff! And I hope you enjoy whichever story of mine you happen to be on! ^^

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Rarity was the fashion diva of the world. She had it all, and everypony loved her. She smiled for all the press, and every magazine cover screamed of her happiness. At least, that was what everypony else thought of here. Sometimes what we are seen as isn't really how we are.

Thanks to Jo for fixing up the cover for me!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 16 )

:coolphoto: Photo Finish demands Celestia sadfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hmm, I don't know if I can handle a "Sad" "Dark" Rarity story right now... But here's a thumbs up for featuring my favorite character :duck:

713903 it is only dark for a single part :eeyup: but I can understand not being innthe mood.

I enjoyed it as much as I can a dark sad fic about Rarity, thank you for a wonderful story:pinkiehappy: I needed a bit of a downer this story fit the bill quite perfectly

714116 I am to deliver sadness to everypony! You should check out my others if you are feeling too happy still :rainbowdetermined2:

734188 No dude, I am done with the sadfics, read up on my blogs.

734196 Yeah, I just read them now. I deserve a slap for not paying attention. >.(\

so sad...good story. Very emotional. :pinkiesad2:

763739 Well, I have many other sadfics, one of which will be submited soon (I hope) about Colgate :fluttershysad: In the words of Twi in Boots: Read them, if you dare!

I dunno, if there's one thing this fic needed it was a lot more detail. The imagery was nice, but it was far too ambiguous. I get that fully explaining what Rarity did would detract from it, but there's a balance that gives us an idea of what she did that isn't here. What did Rarity, the Element of Generosity, mind you, do that destroyed Ponyville and make her kind, loving friends literally assault her. It's OOC on both ends, but if we had a larger grasp of what she did then maybe we'd get it.

Also, Rarity's death needed a lot more too. Did she kill herself? If so, when and how come nopony noticed that she came back to town if it was full of life again. You'd think that a lot of ponies would be forgiving of the mare who single-hoofedly funded the town being rebuilt. Plus Twilight didn't seem too torn up about it. She was just like 'oh, that's too bad' and then cried a little bit.

I dunno, it's a pretty vague and OOC story.

2489382 It's also one of my older, and therefore generally worse, stories.

I wrote this like 10 months ago.

2490260 *chuckle* Boy do I know that feeling.

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