Needle Wings and Cherish have been married for a decade now, and the urges of life took hold of them. About 7 years ago Cherish achieved the greatest feat of life: childbirth. What awaits this pony-changeling hybrid in his life?
WARNING: This story is a sequel to "A Change of Heart". If you haven't read A Change of Heart yet, you will not understand this story fully, but I will try to make things clear.
Here's the link to "A Change of Heart": Link (Keep in mind Change of Heart is nowhere NEAR as well written as this one)
Thanks AGAIN to F4celess for the cover art!
http://f4celessshopps.deviantart.com/  <---Link to his DA
oh boy. its not 1000 words.
the mods aren't gonna be happy.
well at least it reads really good.
734392 it isn't submitted yet >.>'. I will be writing chapter one today/tomorrow and will release it to the public then
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Not submitted. Already favorited.
darnit, it's good. instafav.
734433 aaaaaaw yeaaaaah
734440 same as above :)
734403what? not submitted yet?
FUCK! i ruined the first chapter for myself.
GENIUS!
Already Fav'd.
Yes. It has begun. Oh yea. Faved.
For such a short read it was really well written. you get a stash
734591 It is just the first chapter dude. This will be another entire long-Fiction!
well patience is always a good thing. now to wate fr the chapters to start rolling in.
734609 I know and I look forward to it
734626 I am already writing number 1 :)
total awesomesauce i loved the first story, cant wait to read more of this one
Phoenix Flight will become Equestria's best defense attorney.
735200 I see what you did thar. Next chapter is already written and will be published when I submit the story
735214
735214 Recently saw your youtube interview. Please make a flip a table reference in your story somewhere.
735256 Oh god.... Why....? XD. I might just do it soon. Never know.....
735265 That whole table thing along with your radio bookreading thing is really confusing me on whether or not you are famous.
735285 I LIKE to think of myself as "famous". I might become so later once Reading Rainboom starts up (the radio thingy)
Yeees, I'm so happy you decided to make a sequal, liked and tracked
735344 Yes, I am happy that you are haooy that I decided to make a sequel! Next chapter is done and will be published tomorrow, as well as me submiting the story
735318 Does the radio have a website you can link me to?
735362 Sure does! http://everfreeradio.com/ Go to "Chat and Media streams" ans then to combined veiwer, hope to chat with you soon!
I like where this is going
On a quick path to a feature, nice job CH.
Call the fuzz jack has been mugged!
Only a few more days before you get this on Featured again.
I see that he is getting a beating.
You know, you can turn auto-correct on for the iPad? Go to settings, then general, then keyboard. Auto-correct should be there.
736772 yes, but I find it really brings more grief than anything
I swear that time itself is out to get me...
Ok, tiny little prologue to whet the appetite. Looks like it should be a good story.
Well, that was short and intense. I was hoping for a bit more, but this is a good base to work from. It sounds like Needle still has to deal with a lot of prejudice from the town, so I'm guessing that overall changelings are still a problem plaguing Equestria at large. That would explain why we get to see the new Phoenix Flight looking like he's been the victim of a beatdown. Although, I suppose that given his age, it's also possible that he's around the time where cutie marks start showing up, and if his talent happens to relate to a changeling's abilities in any way, he could have ended up on the wrong side of anyone in school who lost a loved one to them. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter to see where things go from here.
i really hope needle gets revenge for that cruelty to his son. and that his son Phoenix survives
740537 Maybe, maybe not..... *puts pinkie to his mouth* Mwhahahahahah
Hey i just met you and this is crazy so update soon maybe?
740903 Chapter 2 is ready for release right now. I am just waiting for the 24 hour limit to be up before I update so I can get this thing on the front page. After all I want more people
740917 You have no idea how much i love you right now
740982 While you wait, go read my other story "Of Blades and Brothers". It is an adventure/romance fiction like this one, though lacking changelings :)
Sure, I just love love LOVE cliff-hangers
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Cliffhanger why must you exist?!
I really like your... cliff-hangers?
I just hate it when I get to a cliffhanger.
I love hanging from a cliff whats the problem with that?
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Marvelous.
Looking goooood
How that show of yours going?