Magical

Rumors race through Ponyville when the townsfolk are afraid Twilight’s new spell threatens to uncover their secrets. With her friends away, can Twilight face the the music for what she’s done?

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hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #1 · Dec 30th, 2015 · 1 · · Morning In Ponyville ·

I like it so far.

Skye Mist

Skye Mist #2 · Dec 30th, 2015 · · · Morning In Ponyville ·

Really? The ponies of Ponyville are that easily convinced of stuff? Well, shouldn't be that much of a surprise. *cough cough*Flim and Flam*cough cough*

goaway

goaway #3 · Dec 30th, 2015 · · · Morning In Ponyville ·

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Pfft. The ponies of Ponyville are stupid.

JFalk

JFalk #4 · Dec 31st, 2015 · 2 · · The Secret ·

It actually went better than the expected!

Skye Mist

Skye Mist #5 · Dec 31st, 2015 · 2 · · The Secret ·

'Twas beautiful. Bravo.
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hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #6 · Jan 1st, 2016 · 1 · · The Secret ·

This was really nice! A great little slice of life and concept exploration at the same time. I love seeing earth pony magic. ^^ Good job!

Mstar

Mstar #7 · Jan 1st, 2016 · 1 · · The Secret ·

Bravo!

casualbrony10

casualbrony10 #8 · Jan 1st, 2016 · 2 · · The Secret ·

Very well done, this is one of the best depictions of Equestrian magic I've seen on this site.

Koipondponies

Koipondponies #9 · Jan 1st, 2016 · · · The Secret ·

And when I talked about secrets and spells without a good explanation, I made a lot of people very nervous.

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bigbear

bigbear #10 · Jan 1st, 2016 · 1 · · The Secret ·

Thanks for the feedback. I struggled with 'people' vs. 'pony' in that line. There is a 'pony' in the line before and 'everypony' in the line after. Three lines in a row with pony references felt cliched when I reviewed it. I will work harder to keep humanized references to a minimum in the future.

bigbear

bigbear #11 · Jan 1st, 2016 · · · The Secret ·

Magical is my first story that to get to the Popular Stories list on the front page, if only for a little while. Thanks to everyone for the views, likes, favs, and comments!

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