It's over. Equestria has fallen. The four princesses and anyone who had ties to royalty are dead, and the element bearers and their families have been killed. The Kelpies, a race of water-dwelling equines, now rule Equestria with iron hooves. Most ponies now live in fear, though some support their new overlords.
Far off in the Crystal Mountains, a group of escapees look upon their former home. They may have been normal citizens of Equestria once, but now they are warriors. When the time comes, they will fight for Equestria.
A collaboration with PrinceUniversa
OC CREDITS:
Sirocco created by myself
Zodiac Cosmos created by PrinceUniversa
Fang created by TheMysticBrony
Dr. Mind Quill created by Dr_MindQuill
Night Rain created by MrDevestation101
Nerdz created by Nerdz
Reneighah created by Zoetic Zebra
Figureen and Bartholomew Steelclaw created by Rubahhitam
Maryana created by iluvtmnmlp
Berripad created by Verbose Mode
Whitewolf Stormrunner created by Whitewolf_Stormrunner
Hell Fire created by Berserk
Digit Forge created by Nova Arc
Sea Breeze created by Shy Sparkle
Chaz created by Henry101
Melody created by Stardom Freedom
Sponduli Moolalli created by Brickbrock24
This is too awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
6796257 Thank you! The next chapter is in progress as we speak.
Very nice. Lovely intro and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.
Very good intro. I think my character was introduced to the story nicely.
I can hardly wait to read the next chapter and see where this story goes!
Wow! SO interesting! Can't wait for more!
This is a great first chapter! Love what you did with Wolf, and I can't wait to see what sort of adventures (translation; messes) that you get her and her soon-to-be comrades in arms into!
Wow! I love it! So many characters, but that's what's good about it! Looking for more action in future chapters
I wonder where that escape Quill planned leads
hopefully nothing that was waterfront property
cause it probably isn't anymore
OH OK EVERYONES DEAD (this is before I read it) HOLY SHIT
Hi XD that's me!
You did good with her. Looking forward to more~
You know, it's kind of funny that in the similar folder for this story, there are a few Fo:E stories haha
6796273 Trust me and Sakura, this is just getting started!
6796315 I just got wait for Sakura's and then I can get to co-author jobs
6796343 Messes haha
6796518 Honestly, with all these characters, it drives me crazy
6796526 Who knows? I can't even have his mindset
6796538 That would be a shocker already on its own right?
6796960 well the authors got me to ask if they need help with him
6797031 Really? Damn...
6797036 its not exactly an easy mindset to get into
or a "healthy" one
but thats what i'm here for...
being mad as sin
in a 'good' way
6796960 Well, what else do Equestrian ponies get themselves into if not those?
6796265 nice job on the first chapter can't wait to see what Hell fire does.
Also is this all the oc you plan to use?
6797129 These are all the characters, yes.
6798108 good thing I got my in when I did then.
Step one: Read
Step two: React
Reaction:
-Ru
I had almost forgotten about this! I'm intrigued; can wait to see where this goes!
6798167 I'm just lucky that it isn't any bigger than it originally was
6798458 Oh that reaction is priceless
6808785 Depends on Sakura, she's the main writer
6808795 No, no one had made one yet at least I think so.. also thanks for the follow, returning the favor back
6808826 True that, now that I think about, I did recall about this topic... guess I must've slipped my mind
6808775 I felt it to be honestly appropriate . Glad you got a kick out of it . Can't wait to read more !
6808795 6808831 There actually is one ship pair, so....
PrinceUniversa, I'll send it along with the next chapter.
6810692 Oh can't wait!
I like the world building.
Keep up the good work.
You're really good a building a good plot line! Also, I have a quick question. If an OC is updated, like if you fix traits or remember traits you forgot to mention, do we need to let you know?
Nice meeting and development. I can already tell some ponies are gonna get along nicely.
6842714 You know I'm a part of this too right? Hehe
6843061 Agreed though that's just a small gathering right now, there's still a few more OCs missing to be a complete group
6843169 We shall! Also, I find out who's OCs are being shipped in here
6843274 Eh, just saying it out for you
6843234 oh my apologies
Forgive these tired eyes of mine.
College is a cruel Mistress.
I guess the offer extends to you as well .
6843346 No worries, it's understandable in your moment. I'm thankful though
6843348 How is the writing process going for you fellows?
Good I hope.
6843428 Definitely good, right now though, I'm waiting on Sakura's take on Chapter II
6843430 That is good to hear.
I wish you both the most active muses possible.
because Luna knows i don't have one
6843440 'Ey, don't be a downer right now
6843446 Excuse me, I do that sometimes.
I will refrain from it.
6843449 No, I won't mind, just don't always be a downer 'kay?
6842731 Yes, that would be nice.
<(AAAAAAAWWWWWWWEEEEEEESSSSSSSOOOOOOOMMMMMMMEEEEEEE!!!!!)
-Ru
Wow! Well done and nice description of the Crystal Mountains! So looking forward to the next chapter
6858142 Joined!
6900967 I believe she's there, towards the end of the chapter. (If she's not, I can add her in the next chapter)
How's that next chapter coming along?
6923100 Slow, but progressing.
Need MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. How's the next chapter going?
6926694 Soon, once I finish some art requests.