• Published 8th Feb 2016
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Forgiveness - Mystic Shadow



Rainbow Dash and Soarin are best friends. Or used to be. Soarin thinks about the time when Rainbow left to go to Ponyville and remembers all her letters she wrote to him whilst he ignored and carried on with his so called 'happy' life.

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Well, he doesn't

"Ugh I love my friends and all... they can just be... a bit personal..."

"The only reason Fleetfoot is my friend is because shes my team mate and I need to cope with her every session." grumbled Soarin.

"So, what are you doing here anyway?" asked Rainbow, making sure the others HAD actually went.

"Oh I wanted to apologise and ask if you wanted... to go out tomorrow... go to a restaurant, hang out, show you some tricks..."

"I err... yeah, sure..."

"What's up?" asked Soarin.

"Nothing..."

"Okay... around 10am tomorrow?"

"I can't make it then... got weather patrol at 9 till 11... 12 straight?"

"Sure, it's a date."


"Hey Dash, ready?"

Soarin looked around in her house, as he walked in seeing as the door was open, bumping into Rarity.

"HAHAHA! NO! NOOOOO! SHE'S NOT READY YET!" shouted Rarity, all sorts of things laying around Dash's house, a crashing coming from upstairs.

"SOARIN! GET ME OUT OF THIS DRESS!"

Soarin smirked as he looked upon her and couldn't hold back in a laugh.

"Oh come on! You look cute Dashie!"

"..."

Dash glared at him, it wasn't any glare, it was a glare clearly saying 'I'm going to KILL you the moment I get this dress off of me and your GOING to help me get this 'fancy marshmallow' out of my house.'

"..."

"Er..."

"OOH! ARE YOU CALLING RARITY A MARSHMALLOW?! COOL! I CLASS HER AS ONE AS WELL!" squealed Pinkie.

"EEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXCUSSSSSSSEEEEEE MEEE?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"UH OH! I'M OUT!"

"Well... can we just go...?" asked Rainbow, rolling her eyes.

"Uh... sure..."

"HAVE FUN!"

"... sure..."


"So... whats up in life?" asked Soarin.

"Saving the world... trying to get into the wonderbolts... fantasising about you... tube... being in this world..."

"What's youtube?" asked Soarin, looking at her confused.

"Something... Twilight... long story..."

"So... where do you want to go first?" asked Soarin.

"Well... I'm not really hungry at the moment... wanna just fly around town?"

"Sure." shrugged Soarin.

"So... what about you?" asked Dash, taking a moment to scan her home town.

"What?"

"You know... life..."

"Oh! Hard working though fun, joining the Wonderbolts is probably the best thing that happened to me..."

"Yeah... cool..." mumbled Rainbow, feeling crushed, not really knowing why.

"Well... apart from becoming friends with... Spitfire..."

"What...?"

Author's Note:

OOOOHH! WHATS HAPPENING?! I'M SERIOUS, I HAVE NO IDEA! IDEAS JUST ATTACK MY BRAIN! I'M GOING OUT NOW! BYE!

~Mystic

Comments ( 19 )

6952656 No prob!!And yayyyy!!!!!

What is going to happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????

Also aswome and funny chapter!!!!

6952742

tbh, I'm serious and I don't know though I'm the author

6952760 Well it's ok!I can't wait!!!

Umm.. Errr...
I WANT A BIG BOWL OF SOARINDASH FLUFF NEXT CHAPTER
PLEASE AND THANK YOU

6953574

Hmmmmm nah! in at the most around 5 chapters! Maybe I'll throw a kiss is in XD ITZ BUILDING UP! (hoping for it to come in the 3rd/2nd chapter after this one) Sozzy !

UPDATE??!??!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!??!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??!?!?????????????!?!?!?!?

7519493

ChanGed up the plot a bit and for some reason it didn't save, I got frustrated and now I'm going to write it again

YouTube LOL:rainbowlaugh: cute chap though :heart:

7545090 ^^ Old fic, really. cringy to me, gonna re write it in ny spare time ^^

"OOH! ARE YOU CALLING RARITY A MARSHMALLOW?! COOL! I CLASS HER AS ONE AS WELL!" squealed Pinkie.

"EEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXCUSSSSSSSEEEEEE MEEE?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"UH OH! I'M OUT!"

CRAP :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by gscarrerob deleted Nov 24th, 2020

update please continueeeeee I am intrigued, I need to know what will happen

Weeeeeeeellllllllllllll?? What’s next? I’d like to know. Awesome beginning though.

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