• Published 23rd May 2016
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Cruel Fluttershys Return - OceanRider



What will happen when the alternate Fluttershy that discord created comes back and is loose in ponyville.

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Dear Princess Celestia

Author's Note:

This story idea actually came to me in science class for some reason I do not know why. the letter to Celestia was the first thing to enter my head and it just expanded from there. I actually wrote the letter on my school work that I had to hand in and when I got it back the teacher had wrote down "what" with a confused face on it. :rainbowlaugh: Anyways I hope the story will come out good and I hope you will all enjoy the story. If you are interested you can check out my first story What's With Fluttershy.:twilightsmile: Also please no mean comments, I like suggestions and all but nothing rude and hateful:applecry:

Princess Celestia came walking through the doors to her royal courters with a letter enveloped in a light yellow aura which was her magic. Celesta shut the door behind her with her back right hoof and took a seat on her large pillow in the center of her courters and opened up the letter to read it.

Dear Princess Celestia,
I do not know what I should do, before I was reformed I corrupted the mane 6 to act the opposite of their true self's. But when I was reformed I realized that my friend Fluttershy still has that corrupted part in her somewhere so I decided to remove it and lock it up somewhere I thought it could never escape,( the place were cancelled out magic goes). But she has, and now will and can endanger everypony. I don't want to hurt neither one of the two Fluttershys. I don't know how but I WILL stop this alternate Fluttershy and fix everything, no matter how long it will take, I promise.

Sincerely, Discord

Princess Celestia put down the letter with a worried look on her face." Oh no." Celestia mumbled to herself.

Down the castle halls Luna was looking for her sister. "Tia! Tia! Where art thou!"

" Your majesty." Luna turned around to see one of Celestia's royal guards behind her. "If you are looking for your sister she is in her room. She wanted some quiet while she handled some of her duties. "O.K. we thank you for your information." Luna responded to the guard with a smile and a nod right before she went to her sisters room to talk to her.

" Sister, Is thou alright we heard mumbling is there a problem that we can solve." Luna asked as she entered her sisters room with a concerned look on her face" No dear sister it's nothing, I just..., no never mind it's fine." "Very well then." Said Luna as she started to walk out of Celestia's courters and over to her own just down the hall, but with the thought in her head 'then we will have find out for our-self.'

As Celestia saw her dear sister leave she felt a bit of guilt for not telling Luna what was wrong or even what was in that letter for that matter but if she knows Luna, then she knows Luna knew something was wrong would stop at nothing to find out what was wrong even if it took all eternity.' Maby I should have told her.' Celestia finally thought but then again Luna is a smart pony she would probably find out eventually.