Dave attended a local con and wanted to buy an amulet from the Merchant. As he went to buy it, the Merchant kept refusing before another man interrupted and gave him it, forcing him to swear a vow.
Now Dave is a 'tantabus' dwelling amongst the dreams of children and saving them from the nightmares that try to hurt them. Dave, the one with the power of dreams.
Meh.
6961663 seconded.
This could turn out beautifully.
looks good, but needs a little something like him freaking out over the fact that he was just turned into a dream demon or that he most likely will never see his family ever again. something along those lines. also I just realized as I was writing this comment that Bill Cipher from gravity falls is possibly a Tantabus.
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Moar!!!
(Reads authors note)
Yay fluff
6961793 nope
but if anything he would technically be a full fledged alien!
Well... that's new. Still awesome though.
I approve mate, for this is an adorable piece of work.
6961919 he would be considered an alien anyway because he is technically from another planet. being turned into something else wouldn't make you an alien it's about what planet you're born on.
Another self-insert Displaced fic. I thought this fad died out. Although I will give you props for not having your self-insert screw a canon character.
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This is not a self-insert, and the 'fad' has indeed dwindled. If you look at all my other stories, you will see that I try not to follow any of the most common clichés of the HiE genres.
6962628 "Try" being the key word.
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Trying is better than failing without, is it not?
6962784 "Do or do not. There is no 'try'."
-That old guy.
6962856 This.
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Well duh but i was talking about about bill cipher :/
Oh look, it's that psychopath Nightmare is having a dandy old time! Good for him.
Oh...wait, that token sounds familiar...
F**k!
What a wonderful name!
Interesting...
What the...
Roodaka, ey? This should be interesting...
So the WoU Makuta returns in style...
YOU CANT TRI-ooooh woona
on days like thease kids like you SHOULD BE BURNING IN HELL
wait dave is bad now? im a little confused
still confsued
So is there actually a good version of this guy from the first chapter or was that all a piece of fluff?
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Yes, there is a good version, Tantabus is my current focus though.
Huh, so he literally created Nightmare Moon... Interesting....
6991460 Nonono, Dave has the Fluff.
This is the Tantabus, who has the gruesome end of the stick.
6992800 ahh
6992800 and gruesomely hit over the the head with said stick.
7004713 You forgot to add 'repeatedly'
or gettin caught in the rain
6991450 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZcoqR9Bwx1Y
7049296 If your not into yoga,
7102798 XD wait i got somthing 40.media.tumblr.com/2db86ad0a8207951cf11f8355b5653e7/tumblr_inline_o4nxl6vkve1sae1gn_540.jpg
6991450 Que Megalomania!
7139218 i got a better one!
7140214
I actually remixed that song, its somewhere on my YouTube channel.
(Not the video in question, of course)
7140699 Oh huh..
Lung failing, limbs growing cold...*dead*
...Oh well SHIT!!!!
Where's the other guy?
6961740 and second
7139218 Vania, not Mania
Probably shouldn’t be listening horror rock while reading this.
7140699 you dead man if you're not can you please continue the story I love it
You're slowly losing me... You're honestly going the "Golden Freddy" route and making it less interesting.
Okay, I give you one more chapter to either get back to the other half of David that you seem to have forgotten abut or have something happen that brings this half of David SEVERAL pegs down. Also, I'm not saying that you can't have an OP character. Just there are better ways of writing such a character.